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<p> <span word="These">These</span> <span word="days">days</span>, <span word="its">its</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="uncommon">uncommon</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="taking">taking</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="type">type</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="paid">paid</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="countries">countries</span>. <span word="While">While</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="people">people</span>, <span word="Idontknowlly">Idontknowlly</span> <span word="astonished">astonished</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="fact">fact</span>, <span word="firmly">firmly</span> <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="absolutely">absolutely</span> <span word="unreasonable">unreasonable</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="finally">finally</span> <span word="fail">fail</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="check">check</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="anything">anything</span> <span word="wrong">wrong</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="it">it</span>.</p><p> <span word="Those">Those</span> <span word="subjective">subjective</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="overreacting">overreacting</span> <span word="arguments">arguments</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="concern">concern</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="common">common</span>: <span word="childrens">childrens</span> <span word="learning">learning</span>. <span word="Its">Its</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="denying">denying</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="taking">taking</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="part">part</span>-<span word="time">time</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="children">children</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="originally">originally</span> <span word="supposed">supposed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="devoted">devoted</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="study">study</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="fact">fact</span>, <span word="far">far</span> <span word="beyond">beyond</span> <span word="books">books</span>, <span word="learning">learning</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="keeping">keeping</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mind">mind</span> <span word="open">open</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="active">active</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="receive">receive</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="kinds">kinds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>. <span word="Taking">Taking</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="paid">paid</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="actually">actually</span> <span word="provides">provides</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="rare">rare</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="glimpse">glimpse</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="society">society</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="itself">itself</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="gain">gain</span> <span word="fuller">fuller</span> <span word="acknowledge">acknowledge</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="motivation">motivation</span>, <span word="expectation">expectation</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="final">final</span> <span word="objective">objective</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="received">received</span>.</p><p> <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="direct">direct</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="lie">lie</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="childrens">childrens</span> <span word="skill">skill</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="managing">managing</span> <span word="time">time</span>. <span word="Realizing">Realizing</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="left">left</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="study">study</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="automatically">automatically</span> <span word="cut">cut</span> <span word="down">down</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="wasting">wasting</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="activities">activities</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="chatting">chatting</span> <span word="ceaselessly">ceaselessly</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="phone">phone</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="friend">friend</span> <span word="nearby">nearby</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="watching">watching</span> <span word="TV">TV</span>. <span word="With">With</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="wise">wise</span> <span word="guidance">guidance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="parents">parents</span>, <span word="this">this</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="surely">surely</span> <span word="perfect">perfect</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="skill">skill</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="operating">operating</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="paramount">paramount</span> <span word="importance">importance</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="competitive">competitive</span> <span word="world">world</span>.</p><p> <span word="Besides">Besides</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="mentioned">mentioned</span> <span word="above">above</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="paid">paid</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="children">children</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="easing">easing</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="burden">burden</span>, <span word="teaching">teaching</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="responsibility">responsibility</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="plans">plans</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="spending">spending</span>, <span word="etc">etc</span>. <span word="Thus">Thus</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="completely">completely</span> <span word="advocate">advocate</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="paid">paid</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span>.</p>
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