雅思写作范文：严惩违规可以提高道路安全吗？
<p> <span word="Topic">Topic</span>： <span word="Its">Its</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="satety">satety</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="roads">roads</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="strict">strict</span> <span word="punishment">punishment</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="driving">driving</span> <span word="offence">offence</span>.<span word="Are">Are</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="that">that</span>?</p><p> 题目问的是：你赞同还是反对提高道路安全的唯一途径是严惩驾驶违规行为。如果你赞同，你就必须证明严惩驾驶违规行为是唯一途径;如果你反对，则要证明严惩驾驶违规行为不是唯一途径。注意审题，不然很容易偏题。我的立场是赞同。</p><p> <span word="IDEAS">IDEAS</span>：</p><p> 1.正是因为处罚轻，使得违规驾驶的肇事司机丧无视他人生命及安全，只有严惩，才能防止违规驾驶，确保道路安全。论据：2004年中国大中城市交通事故报告显示：事故原因有80%由违规驾驶所致。大多数司机的安全意识很淡薄。</p><p> 2.近年来政府加大交通安全的宣传力度，但收效甚微，违规驾驶现象高居不下，只有严惩才能起到杀鸡杀儆候之效</p><p> 3.以新加坡为例，法律严明，交通事故率极低。</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="safety">safety</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="roads">roads</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="focus">focus</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="attention">attention</span>.<span word="people">people</span> <span word="come">come</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="various">various</span> <span word="solutions">solutions</span>,<span word="but">but</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="emphasize">emphasize</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="feasible">feasible</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="strict">strict</span> <span word="punishment">punishment</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="driving">driving</span> <span word="offence">offence</span>.<span word="Personally">Personally</span>,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="share">share</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="peoples">peoples</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="view">view</span>.</p><p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="lesser">lesser</span> <span word="punishment">punishment</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="hit">hit</span>-<span word="and">and</span>-<span word="run">run</span> <span word="drivers">drivers</span> <span word="devoid">devoid</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reverence">reverence</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="peoples">peoples</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="close">close</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="road">road</span> <span word="safety">safety</span>.---<span word="topic">topic</span> <span word="sentence">sentence</span> <span word="An">An</span> <span word="authoritative">authoritative</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="analysis">analysis</span> <span word="reporting">reporting</span> <span word="indicates">indicates</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="approximately">approximately</span> 80% <span word="of">of</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="driving">driving</span> <span word="offence">offence</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="occured">occured</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="medium">medium</span> <span word="cities">cities</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="China">China</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="second">second</span> <span word="half">half</span> <span word="of">of</span> 2004, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rest">rest</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="due">due</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="weather">weather</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="automobile">automobile</span>. <span word="These">These</span> <span word="statistics">statistics</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="automobile">automobile</span> <span word="drivers">drivers</span> <span word="lack">lack</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="consciousness">consciousness</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="safe">safe</span> <span word="driving">driving</span>.<span word="They">They</span> <span word="deserve">deserve</span> <span word="severe">severe</span> <span word="legal">legal</span> <span word="punishment">punishment</span>.<span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="stricter">stricter</span> <span word="punishment">punishment</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="carried">carried</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="driving">driving</span> <span word="offence">offence</span> <span word="decrease">decrease</span>.</p>
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