雅思写作7分范文：教育、个人发展与社会
<p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="generally">generally</span> <span word="believed">believed</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="vital">vital</span> <span word="importance">importance</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="well">well</span>-<span word="being">being</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="societies">societies</span>. <span word="What">What</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="consist">consist</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="fulfill">fulfill</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="functions">functions</span>?</p><p> <span word="With">With</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rapid">rapid</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="society">society</span>, <span word="education">education</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="crucial">crucial</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="societies">societies</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="consist">consist</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="considerably">considerably</span> <span word="aroused">aroused</span> <span word="peoples">peoples</span> <span word="wide">wide</span> <span word="concern">concern</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="essay">essay</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="seek">seek</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="explore">explore</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="complicated">complicated</span> <span word="topic">topic</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="diverse">diverse</span> <span word="perspectives">perspectives</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="influence">influence</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="brought">brought</span>.</p><p> <span word="Among">Among</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="aspects">aspects</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="consist">consist</span> <span word="of">of</span>, <span word="one">one</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="stressed">stressed</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="education">education</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="under">under</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fierce">fierce</span> <span word="competitive">competitive</span> <span word="circumstance">circumstance</span>, <span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="skills">skills</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="attract">attract</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="big">big</span> <span word="companies">companies</span>. <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="study">study</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="special">special</span> <span word="area">area</span> <span word="gives">gives</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="opportunities">opportunities</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hurt">hurt</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="ideal">ideal</span> <span word="job">job</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="this">this</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="significant">significant</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="develop">develop</span> <span word="societies">societies</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="run">run</span>.</p><p> <span word="At">At</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="second">second</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="what">what</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="worth">worth</span> <span word="noticing">noticing</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="physical">physical</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="students">students</span>, <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="teenagers">teenagers</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="achieve">achieve</span> <span word="successfully">successfully</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="societies">societies</span>, <span word="strong">strong</span> <span word="body">body</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="premise">premise</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="sharp">sharp</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="push">push</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="bring">bring</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="healthy">healthy</span> <span word="society">society</span>.</p><p> <span word="Last">Last</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="least">least</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="lose">lose</span> <span word="sight">sight</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="psychological">psychological</span> <span word="education">education</span>. <span word="Psychological">Psychological</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="serious">serious</span> <span word="nowadays">nowadays</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sizable">sizable</span> <span word="percentage">percentage</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="suffer">suffer</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="them">them</span>. <span word="A">A</span> <span word="survey">survey</span> <span word="conducted">conducted</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="famous">famous</span> <span word="research">research</span> <span word="organization">organization</span> <span word="indicates">indicates</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="over">over</span> 40 <span word="percent">percent</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="various">various</span> <span word="psychological">psychological</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>, <span word="who">who</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="society">society</span>. <span word="Even">Even</span> <span word="worse">worse</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="solved">solved</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="hamper">hamper</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="progress">progress</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="well">well</span>-<span word="being">being</span> <span word="society">society</span>.</p>
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