雅思写作范文分析：学校降低录取标准
<p> <span word="Task">Task</span> <span word="Two">Two</span></p><p> <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="famous">famous</span> <span word="universities">universities</span> <span word="lower">lower</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="requirements">requirements</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enroll">enroll</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="outstanding">outstanding</span> <span word="athletic">athletic</span> <span word="talents">talents</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="practice">practice</span>? <span word="Give">Give</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>.</p><p> <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 250 <span word="words">words</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="approximately">approximately</span> 40 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="task">task</span>.</p><p> 对范文的点评</p><p> <span word="Sample">Sample</span> 1</p><p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="becomes">becomes</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="common">common</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="universities">universities</span>, <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="famous">famous</span> <span word="universities">universities</span>, <span word="lower">lower</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="standards">standards</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enrol">enrol</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="special">special</span> <span word="athletic">athletic</span> <span word="talents">talents</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="activity">activity</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="universities">universities</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="reasonable">reasonable</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="accepted">accepted</span>.</p><p> <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="students">students</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="special">special</span> <span word="athletic">athletic</span> <span word="talents">talents</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="scores">scores</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="maybe">maybe</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="opportunities">opportunities</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="receive">receive</span> <span word="higher">higher</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="studies">studies</span>. <span word="Universities">Universities</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="lower">lower</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="standards">standards</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enrol">enrol</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="turn">turn</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="dreams">dreams</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="realities">realities</span>. <span word="Sometimes">Sometimes</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="universities">universities</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="enrol">enrol</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="special">special</span> <span word="athletic">athletic</span> <span word="talents">talents</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="conditions">conditions</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="athletic">athletic</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="athletic">athletic</span> <span word="levels">levels</span>.</p><p> <span word="Second">Second</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="helpful">helpful</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="universities">universities</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="athletic">athletic</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="fames">fames</span>. <span word="Competition">Competition</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="universities">universities</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="extensive">extensive</span>. <span word="Most">Most</span> <span word="famous">famous</span> <span word="universities">universities</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="attentions">attentions</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="researches">researches</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="aspects">aspects</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="example">example</span> <span word="arts">arts</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="sports">sports</span>. <span word="Good">Good</span> <span word="athletic">athletic</span> <span word="scores">scores</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fames">fames</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="universities">universities</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="attract">attract</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="exelent">exelent</span> <span word="students">students</span>. <span word="All">All</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="competitive">competitive</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="universities">universities</span>.</p>
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