雅思写作范文：Task 1 图表作文
<p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="bar">bar</span> <span word="chart">chart</span> <span word="compares">compares</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="proportion">proportion</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="genders">genders</span> <span word="employed">employed</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="executive">executive</span> <span word="positions">positions</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="ACME">ACME</span> <span word="oil">oil</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="within">within</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="period">period</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="July">July</span> 1993 <span word="and">and</span> <span word="June">June</span> 1994. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="seen">seen</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="chart">chart</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="percentage">percentage</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="male">male</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="generally">generally</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rise">rise</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="categories">categories</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Grade">Grade</span> <span word="E">E</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Grade">Grade</span> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opposite">opposite</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="true">true</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="women">women</span>.</p><p> <span word="Grade">Grade</span> <span word="A">A</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="reported">reported</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="highest">highest</span> <span word="position">position</span>, <span word="was">was</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="male">male</span> <span word="dominated">dominated</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="one">one</span>-<span word="tenth">tenth</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="female">female</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="male">male</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="accounted">accounted</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rest">rest</span>.</p><p> <span word="When">When</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="comes">comes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Grade">Grade</span> <span word="B">B</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="C">C</span>, <span word="man">man</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="half">half</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="employees">employees</span>, <span word="accounting">accounting</span> <span word="for">for</span> 80% <span word="and">and</span> 60%, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="are">are</span> 50% <span word="and">and</span> 10% <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="woman">woman</span> <span word="respectively">respectively</span>.</p><p> <span word="However">However</span>,, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="situation">situation</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="categories">categories</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="relatively">relatively</span> <span word="lower">lower</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="totally">totally</span> <span word="converse">converse</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="women">women</span> <span word="taking">taking</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="larger">larger</span> <span word="proportions">proportions</span>. <span word="Men">Men</span> <span word="constituted">constituted</span> <span word="roughly">roughly</span> 40% <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Grade">Grade</span> <span word="D">D</span>, 20% <span word="less">less</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="woman">woman</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Grade">Grade</span> <span word="E">E</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="women">women</span> , <span word="twice">twice</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="men">men</span>.</p><p> </p>
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