雅思写作典型病句分析
<p> <span word="Task">Task</span> <span word="Two">Two</span></p><p> <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="famous">famous</span> <span word="universities">universities</span> <span word="lower">lower</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="requirements">requirements</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enroll">enroll</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="outstanding">outstanding</span> <span word="athletic">athletic</span> <span word="talents">talents</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="practice">practice</span>? <span word="Give">Give</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>.</p><p> <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 250 <span word="words">words</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="approximately">approximately</span> 40 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="task">task</span>.</p><p> 对病句的点评</p><p> 误：<span word="Lowering">Lowering</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="standards">standards</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="special">special</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="lead">lead</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="decline">decline</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="destroy">destroy</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="respection">respection</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="college">college</span>.</p><p> <span word="decline">decline</span> 之后应有介词<span word="in">in</span> 或 <span word="of">of</span>。 <span word="destroy">destroy</span> 是动词，此处应用名词 <span word="destruction">destruction</span> ，与前面的 <span word="decline">decline</span> 平行，均为 <span word="lead">lead</span> <span word="to">to</span> 的宾语. <span word="Respection">Respection</span> 完全不对，根本没有这个单词。作者想用 <span word="respect">respect</span> ，但仍不对，要用 <span word="reputation">reputation</span> 。但<span word="destruction">destruction</span> 与 <span word="reputation">reputation</span> 又不是很好的 搭配，因此应将 <span word="destruction">destruction</span> 改为<span word="damage">damage</span>。</p><p> 正： <span word="Lowering">Lowering</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="standards">standards</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="special">special</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="lead">lead</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="decline">decline</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="damage">damage</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reputation">reputation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="school">school</span>.</p><p> 或： <span word="Lowering">Lowering</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="standards">standards</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="special">special</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="lead">lead</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="decline">decline</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="damage">damage</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reputation">reputation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="school">school</span>.</p><p> 误：<span word="Their">Their</span> <span word="opportunities">opportunities</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="entering">entering</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="occupied">occupied</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="athletic">athletic</span> <span word="talents">talents</span>.</p><p> 作者有用定语修饰 <span word="opportunities">opportunities</span> 的意图，但因语法错误而效果极差。其实很简单，用 <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enter">enter</span> 即可。</p>
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