雅思写作范文修改：电视的好处
<p> 改前：</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="bring">bring</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="advantages">advantages</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="shown">shown</span> <span word="itself">itself</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="true">true</span> <span word="throughout">throughout</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="years">years</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="televisions">televisions</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="disadvantages">disadvantages</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="being">being</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="fact">fact</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="caused">caused</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="proven">proven</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="now">now</span> <span word="playing">playing</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="li">li</span>123 <span word="For">For</span> <span word="instance">instance</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="formed">formed</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="current">current</span> <span word="events">events</span>, <span word="instructive">instructive</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="entertaining">entertaining</span>.</p><p> <span word="From">From</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="shows">shows</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="follow">follow</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="late">late</span> <span word="developments">developments</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="science">science</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="politics">politics</span>. <span word="A">A</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="television">television</span> <span word="programs">programs</span> <span word="introduce">introduce</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="thought">thought</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="heard">heard</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="before">before</span>. <span word="Also">Also</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="broadcast">broadcast</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="sport">sport</span> <span word="matches">matches</span>, <span word="allow">allow</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="newest">newest</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="football">football</span> <span word="leagues">leagues</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="country">country</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span>, <span word="people">people</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="longer">longer</span> <span word="distant">distant</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="isolated">isolated</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="other">other</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="distant">distant</span> <span word="countries">countries</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="strangest">strangest</span> <span word="customs">customs</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="brought">brought</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="sitting">sitting</span> <span word="room">room</span>.</p><p> <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="provides">provides</span> <span word="enormous">enormous</span> <span word="possibilities">possibilities</span> <span word="fro">fro</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="programs">programs</span> <span word="via">via</span> <span word="closed">closed</span>-<span word="circuit">circuit</span> <span word="television">television</span>. <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="provides">provides</span> <span word="special">special</span> <span word="broadcasts">broadcasts</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="university">university</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="open">open</span> <span word="university">university</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="offers">offers</span> <span word="specialized">specialized</span> <span word="subjects">subjects</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="language">language</span> <span word="teaching">teaching</span>, <span word="sewing">sewing</span>, <span word="cooking">cooking</span>, <span word="painting">painting</span>, <span word="cosmetics">cosmetics</span>, <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="convenient">convenient</span> <span word="source">source</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="entertainment">entertainment</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="comparatively">comparatively</span> <span word="cheap">cheap</span> <span word="one">one</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="watching">watching</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="varied">varied</span> <span word="relaxed">relaxed</span> <span word="programs">programs</span>, <span word="people">people</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="release">release</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="continue">continue</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="mettlesomely">mettlesomely</span>.</p>
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