雅思写作高分观点：学生兼职是件好事吗？
<p> <span word="Is">Is</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="part">part</span>-<span word="time">time</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span>?</p><p> <span word="Arguments">Arguments</span></p><p> 1. <span word="Its">Its</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="part">part</span>-<span word="time">time</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="helps">helps</span> <span word="cultivate">cultivate</span> <span word="independence">independence</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="people">people</span>.</p><p> 2. <span word="Part">Part</span>-<span word="time">time</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="foster">foster</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="competition">competition</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="future">future</span>.</p><p> 3. <span word="Being">Being</span> <span word="able">able</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="earn">earn</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="gives">gives</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="feeling">feeling</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="theyve">theyve</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="adults">adults</span> <span word="and">and</span>, <span word="therefore">therefore</span>, <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="mature">mature</span>.</p><p> 4. <span word="Part">Part</span>-<span word="time">time</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="confident">confident</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="realize">realize</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="value">value</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="prove">prove</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="capable">capable</span> <span word="people">people</span>.</p><p> 5. <span word="Part">Part</span>-<span word="time">time</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="gives">gives</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="insight">insight</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="prepares">prepares</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="psychologically">psychologically</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="future">future</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span>.</p><p> 6. <span word="After">After</span>-<span word="school">school</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="teaches">teaches</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="earn">earn</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="helps">helps</span> <span word="develop">develop</span> <span word="thriftiness">thriftiness</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="younger">younger</span> <span word="generation">generation</span>.</p><p> 7. <span word="Part">Part</span>-<span word="time">time</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="practice">practice</span>, <span word="and">and</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="return">return</span>, <span word="their">their</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="learned">learned</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="classes">classes</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="books">books</span>.</p><p> 8. <span word="Part">Part</span>-<span word="time">time</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="feeling">feeling</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="achievement">achievement</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="contributing">contributing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="national">national</span> <span word="construction">construction</span>.</p><p> 9. <span word="Students">Students</span> <span word="part">part</span>-<span word="time">time</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="eontribnte">eontribnte</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="another">another</span>, <span word="to">to</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="socialist">socialist</span> <span word="construction">construction</span>.</p><p> 10. <span word="Students">Students</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="part">part</span>-<span word="time">time</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="relieve">relieve</span>, <span word="to">to</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="extent">extent</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="burdens">burdens</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="parents">parents</span>.</p>
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