评析一篇雅思写作6分范文的优缺点
<p> 雅思写作的满分是9分，雅思6分作文是一个什么概念呢?雅思6分作文总体来说比较尴尬，高不成，低不就，想要雅思所得7分以上的话，6分的雅思写作肯定就是拖后腿的项目，那么要如何去突破雅思6分作文呢?下面就对一篇6分的雅思写作文章进行细节的优点和缺点分析，希望大家在雅思写作上遇到瓶颈的同学也能突破。下面和小编一起来看看吧：</p><p> 雅思6分作文例文：</p><p> <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="competition">competition</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="encouraged">encouraged</span>. <span word="Others">Others</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="taught">taught</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="co">co</span>-<span word="operate">operate</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="compete">compete</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="useful">useful</span> <span word="adults">adults</span>. <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="views">views</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>.</p><p> <span word="Nowadays">Nowadays</span>, <span word="purpose">purpose</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="changed">changed</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Korea">Korea</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="competition">competition</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="made">made</span>, <span word="also">also</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="taught">taught</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="co">co</span>-<span word="operate">operate</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="useful">useful</span> <span word="adults">adults</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="advantages">advantages</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="disadvantages">disadvantages</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="arguments">arguments</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="what">what</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="competition">competition</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="made">made</span>? <span word="They">They</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="develop">develop</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="win">win</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="competition">competition</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="prove">prove</span> <span word="this">this</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Korea">Korea</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="popular">popular</span>- <span word="even">even</span> <span word="common">common</span> <span word="now">now</span>- <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="tutor">tutor</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="come">come</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="house">house</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="teach">teach</span> <span word="extra">extra</span> <span word="pieces">pieces</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="paying">paying</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="money">money</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="faster">faster</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="school">school</span>. <span word="Furthermore">Furthermore</span>, <span word="during">during</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="vocations">vocations</span>, <span word="students">students</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="abroad">abroad</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="month">month</span> <span word="instead">instead</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="revise">revise</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="work">work</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="experiments">experiments</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="abroad">abroad</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="greatest">greatest</span> <span word="plus">plus</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="famous">famous</span> <span word="well">well</span>-<span word="known">known</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="school">school</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="four">four</span> <span word="big">big</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="exam">exam</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="national">national</span> <span word="examinations">examinations</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="test">test</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="level">level</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="studies">studies</span>. <span word="Generally">Generally</span>, <span word="only">only</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="highest">highest</span> 40% <span word="can">can</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="highschools">highschools</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="colleges">colleges</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="can">can</span>, <span word="to">to</span> <span word="win">win</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="competition">competition</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="obtain">obtain</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="schools">schools</span>.</p>
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