如何确保雅思写作中心思想的统一性
<p> 一个段落内的各个句子必须从属于一个中心，任何游离于中心思想之外的句子都是不可取的。这里就不得不提到雅思写作统一性的问题，为此小编特收集整理雅思写作统一性相关问题，分享给大家，希望对大家有所帮助。下面和小编一起来看看吧：</p><p> 请看下例：</p><p> <span word="Joe">Joe</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="decided">decided</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="trip">trip</span> <span word="wed">wed</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="wanted">wanted</span> <span word="across">across</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="country">country</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="kids">kids</span> <span word="buying">buying</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="camper">camper</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="stocking">stocking</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="necessities">necessities</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="Bella">Bella</span> <span word="bakes">bakes</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="rhubarb">rhubarb</span> <span word="pie">pie</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="started">started</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="early">early</span> <span word="spring">spring</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Minneapolis">Minneapolis</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="headed">headed</span> <span word="west">west</span> <span word="across">across</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="northern">northern</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="country">country</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="enjoyed">enjoyed</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="met">met</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="trailer">trailer</span> <span word="park">park</span>. <span word="Joe">Joe</span> <span word="received">received</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="watch">watch</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="retirement">retirement</span> <span word="dinner">dinner</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="surprise">surprise</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="liked">liked</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="warm">warm</span> <span word="southern">southern</span> <span word="regions">regions</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="much">much</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="decided">decided</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="stay">stay</span> <span word="here">here</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="New">New</span> <span word="Mexico">Mexico</span>.</p><p> 本段的主题句是段首句，<span word="controlling">controlling</span> <span word="idea">idea</span>是<span word="take">take</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="trip">trip</span> <span word="across">across</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="country">country</span>。文中出现两个<span word="irrelevant">irrelevant</span> <span word="sentences">sentences</span>，一个是<span word="Bella">Bella</span> <span word="bakes">bakes</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="rhubarb">rhubarb</span> <span word="pie">pie</span>，这一段是讲的是<span word="Joe">Joe</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span>，中间出现一个<span word="Bella">Bella</span>是不合适的。还有，<span word="Joe">Joe</span> <span word="received">received</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="watch">watch</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="retirement">retirement</span> <span word="dinner">dinner</span>这一句更是与主题句不相关。考生在作文卷上常常因为造出<span word="irrelevant">irrelevant</span> <span word="sentences">sentences</span>而丢分，值得引起注意。再看一个例子：</p><p> <span word="My">My</span> <span word="name">name</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="Roseanna">Roseanna</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="physically">physically</span> <span word="fit">fit</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="weigh">weigh</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="hundred">hundred</span> <span word="pounds">pounds</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="joined">joined</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="YMCA">YMCA</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span> <span word="class">class</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="diet">diet</span> <span word="program">program</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="lost">lost</span> <span word="eighty">eighty</span> <span word="pounds">pounds</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="weight">weight</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="five">five</span>-<span word="feet">feet</span> <span word="frame">frame</span> <span word="again">again</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="bought">bought</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="suitcases">suitcases</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="week">week</span>. <span word="Everyday">Everyday</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="practice">practice</span> <span word="jogging">jogging</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="miles">miles</span>, <span word="swimming">swimming</span> <span word="fifteen">fifteen</span> <span word="laps">laps</span>, <span word="lifting">lifting</span> <span word="twenty">twenty</span>-<span word="pound">pound</span> <span word="weights">weights</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="playing">playing</span> <span word="tennis">tennis</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="hour">hour</span>. <span word="My">My</span> <span word="mother">mother</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="premature">premature</span> <span word="baby">baby</span>.</p>
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