雅思写作真题点评及范文：穷人的孩子早当家
<p> <span word="Children">Children</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="grow">grow</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="families">families</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="amounts">amounts</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="prepared">prepared</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="deal">deal</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="adult">adult</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="brought">brought</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="wealthy">wealthy</span> <span word="parents">parents</span>. <span word="Do">Do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span>?</p><p> 题目点评：这道题是<span word="IELTS">IELTS</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="task">task</span> 2当中比较少见的看着容易写好太难的题目。咱们首先要注意区别<span word="families">families</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="amounts">amounts</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="money">money</span>和<span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="families">families</span>这两个概念的差异，前者不仅仅指<span word="low">low</span>-<span word="income">income</span> <span word="families">families</span>还要包括 <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="income">income</span> <span word="families">families</span>，所以题目的意思和一些同学概括的穷人的孩子早当家不同;另外一个误区在于因为这道题目和中国文化比较贴近，很多同学会举过多的简单生活事例但是却忽视了普遍性推理，导致论证缺乏深度。7月份写作变题之后<span word="GZ">GZ</span>的判分明显不如以前严格，所以估计这次打分也会放松，但是我们在准备写作考试的时候不应该降低对自己的要求。</p><p> 从论点上看，考虑到多数考生更熟悉中国的国情，肯定是<span word="totally">totally</span> <span word="agree">agree</span>更好写,布什的内阁里面现在也有拉洋板儿车出身的。既然观点写一边倒，那么结构当然就是五段式开头段转述题目+主旨句，主体段1讲一般家庭的孩子比富家孩子有更强的心理承受能力，主体段2讲一般家庭的孩子有更强的独立性，主体段3讲普通家庭的家长对小孩的要求往往更严格，结尾段总结上文三层意思。<span word="thesis">thesis</span> <span word="statement">statement</span>和<span word="topic">topic</span> <span word="sentences">sentences</span>要是少了，扣分没商量哦!</p>
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