雅思写作范文分享：犯罪是人的天性
<p> 有些人认为犯罪是人的天性，而有些人认为我们可以在小孩小的时候停止他们的这种倾向，你有什么看法?</p><p> <span word="Crimes">Crimes</span> <span word="undermine">undermine</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="society">society</span>. <span word="Reasons">Reasons</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="committing">committing</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="crime">crime</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="varied">varied</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="complex">complex</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="violation">violation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="law">law</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="nature">nature</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="peoples">peoples</span> <span word="tendency">tendency</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="break">break</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="law">law</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="stopped">stopped</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="young">young</span>.</p><p> <span word="We">We</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="sure">sure</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="causes">causes</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="commit">commit</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="crime">crime</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="clear">clear</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="cases">cases</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="thief">thief</span> <span word="steals">steals</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="buy">buy</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="normally">normally</span> <span word="unaffordable">unaffordable</span>. <span word="Many">Many</span> <span word="thieves">thieves</span>, <span word="when">when</span> <span word="caught">caught</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="interviewed">interviewed</span>, <span word="reveal">reveal</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="come">come</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="families">families</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="education">education</span>. <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="establish">establish</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="relation">relation</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="privileged">privileged</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="background">background</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="low">low</span> <span word="level">level</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="education">education</span>. <span word="Many">Many</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="teach">teach</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="harms">harms</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="wrongdoing">wrongdoing</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="showing">showing</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="consequences">consequences</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="action">action</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="obligation">obligation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="complying">complying</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="norms">norms</span>. <span word="Such">Such</span> <span word="method">method</span> <span word="works">works</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="aware">aware</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="happen">happen</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="action">action</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="news">news</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="sources">sources</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="high">high</span>-<span word="level">level</span> <span word="officials">officials</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="bribes">bribes</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="abuse">abuse</span> <span word="power">power</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span>. <span word="Such">Such</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="income">income</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="clearly">clearly</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="consequences">consequences</span>. <span word="Such">Such</span> <span word="crimes">crimes</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="happened">happened</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="tendency">tendency</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="commit">commit</span> <span word="crimes">crimes</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="stopped">stopped</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="young">young</span>.</p><p> <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="tend">tend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="act">act</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="due">due</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="nature">nature</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="causes">causes</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="ideas">ideas</span> <span word="learned">learned</span> <span word="later">later</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="nature">nature</span>, <span word="people">people</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="faraway">faraway</span> <span word="places">places</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="commit">commit</span> <span word="crimes">crimes</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="higher">higher</span> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="schooling">schooling</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="cities">cities</span>. <span word="By">By</span> <span word="contrast">contrast</span>, <span word="people">people</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="remote">remote</span> <span word="places">places</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="honest">honest</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="kind">kind</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="crime">crime</span> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="significantly">significantly</span> <span word="lower">lower</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="city">city</span>. <span word="From">From</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="conclude">conclude</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="above">above</span> <span word="assertion">assertion</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="true">true</span>.</p>
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