雅思写作范文：支边还是自由选择工作
<p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="countries">countries</span>, <span word="good">good</span> <span word="schools">schools</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="medical">medical</span> <span word="facilities">facilities</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="available">available</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="cities">cities</span>. <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="doctors">doctors</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="rural">rural</span> <span word="areas">areas</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="few">few</span> <span word="years">years</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="everyone">everyone</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="free">free</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="choose">choose</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="work">work</span> .<span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>.</p><p> 题目分析：</p><p> 具体看这道题，当然是想素材四种方法当中的综合法得出观点：去农村有好处但是要自愿。那么就四段，还是老一套，开头段3+1或者再加一句4+1，主体段1讲不太倾向的观点1+4，主体段第二段更倾向的观点1+6，结尾段3句。</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="age">age</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="generally">generally</span> <span word="observed">observed</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="disparity">disparity</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="cities">cities</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="aggravated">aggravated</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="relentless">relentless</span> <span word="urbanization">urbanization</span>. <span word="With">With</span> <span word="respect">respect</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="educational">educational</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="medical">medical</span> <span word="facilities">facilities</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="yawning">yawning</span> <span word="gap">gap</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="emerged">emerged</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="cities">cities</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rural">rural</span> <span word="ones">ones</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="manifest">manifest</span> <span word="chasm">chasm</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="prompted">prompted</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="suggest">suggest</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="doctors">doctors</span> <span word="fresh">fresh</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="few">few</span> <span word="years">years</span>.<span word="Yet">Yet</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="opposed">opposed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="grounds">grounds</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="infringes">infringes</span> <span word="upon">upon</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="freedom">freedom</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="choose">choose</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="work">work</span>.<span word="Personally">Personally</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="views">views</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="merit">merit</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="demerit">demerit</span>.</p><p> <span word="Granted">Granted</span>,<span word="assigning">assigning</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="doctors">doctors</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="countryside">countryside</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="create">create</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span>.<span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>,<span word="this">this</span> <span word="practice">practice</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="foster">foster</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="strong">strong</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="obligation">obligation</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="doctors">doctors</span>.<span word="They">They</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="first">first</span>-<span word="hand">hand</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rural">rural</span> <span word="residents">residents</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="held">held</span> <span word="back">back</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="out">out</span>-<span word="moded">moded</span> <span word="teaching">teaching</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="medical">medical</span> <span word="facilities">facilities</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="this">this</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="turn">turn</span>, <span word="can">can</span> <span word="inspire">inspire</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="host">host</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="professionals">professionals</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="commit">commit</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="alleviation">alleviation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="disturbing">disturbing</span> <span word="situation">situation</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>,<span word="the">the</span> <span word="inferior">inferior</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="conditions">conditions</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="temper">temper</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="professionals">professionals</span> <span word="soul">soul</span>.<span word="They">They</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="tenacious">tenacious</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="determined">determined</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="hence">hence</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="successful">successful</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="urban">urban</span> <span word="counterparts">counterparts</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="later">later</span> <span word="careers">careers</span>.</p>
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