雅思写作范文：疾病的治疗与预防
<p> <span word="Prevention">Prevention</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="cure">cure</span>: <span word="Out">Out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="countrys">countrys</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="budget">budget</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="proportion">proportion</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="diverted">diverted</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="treatment">treatment</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="spending">spending</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="preventative">preventative</span> <span word="measures">measures</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="rising">rising</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="countries">countries</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="deal">deal</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="problem">problem</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="recommended">recommended</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="big">big</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="state">state</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="budget">budget</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="disease">disease</span> <span word="prevention">prevention</span> <span word="instead">instead</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="treatment">treatment</span>.<span word="First">First</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="kinds">kinds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="diseases">diseases</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="preventable">preventable</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="preventing">preventing</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="disease">disease</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="usually">usually</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="cheaper">cheaper</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="treating">treating</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="people">people</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="prevent">prevent</span> <span word="catching">catching</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="cold">cold</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="dress">dress</span> <span word="warmly">warmly</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="rest">rest</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="weather">weather</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="gets">gets</span> <span word="cold">cold</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="winter">winter</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="sick">sick</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="fail">fail</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="seeing">seeing</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="doct">doct</span>123 <span word="Another">Another</span> <span word="case">case</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="cancer">cancer</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="leading">leading</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="death">death</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="lung">lung</span> <span word="cancer">cancer</span>, <span word="liver">liver</span> <span word="cancer">cancer</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="kinds">kinds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="cancer">cancer</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="effectively">effectively</span> <span word="prevented">prevented</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="measures">measures</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="early">early</span> <span word="stage">stage</span>. <span word="Small">Small</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="smoking">smoking</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="eating">eating</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="healthy">healthy</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="kept">kept</span> <span word="millions">millions</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="families">families</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="bankrupt">bankrupt</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="patients">patients</span> <span word="took">took</span> <span word="measures">measures</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="early">early</span> <span word="cancer">cancer</span> <span word="prevention">prevention</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="health">health</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="plays">plays</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="key">key</span> <span word="role">role</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="improving">improving</span> <span word="peoples">peoples</span> <span word="health">health</span>. <span word="By">By</span> <span word="giving">giving</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="health">health</span>, <span word="countries">countries</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="importance">importance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="disease">disease</span> <span word="prevention">prevention</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="ways">ways</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="achieve">achieve</span> <span word="it">it</span>.<span word="However">However</span>, <span word="emphasizing">emphasizing</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="disease">disease</span> <span word="prevention">prevention</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="downplaying">downplaying</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="significance">significance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="medical">medical</span> <span word="treatment">treatment</span>. <span word="After">After</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="prevention">prevention</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="treatment">treatment</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="toward">toward</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="e">e</span>12<span word="In">In</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="save">save</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="treat">treat</span> <span word="patients">patients</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="successfully">successfully</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="uses">uses</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="prevention">prevention</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="education">education</span>.</p>
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