雅思写作中的典型错误分析
<p> 最近雅思作文维持这一个显著的特点，意思难懂，争论的焦点难以把握。很多考生在考场上看了几个认识的单词，然后翻译成中文，加上自己的想象，就开始下笔。无论语言多好，也很难拿到及格的分数。把握一个题目争论之处，有的放矢，才能够保证文章切题，获得高分。笔者将分析最近的一些作文题目，然后用一些学生的观点做例子，以帮助广大考生以后更好更快地切题。</p><p> <span word="Traffic">Traffic</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="housing">housing</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="cities">cities</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="solved">solved</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="moving">moving</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="companies">companies</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="factories">factories</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="countryside">countryside</span>. <span word="Do">Do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span>?</p><p> 观点一： <span word="it">it</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="cost">cost</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="moving">moving</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="companies">companies</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="factories">factories</span>, <span word="since">since</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="prove">prove</span> <span word="difficult">difficult</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="operate">operate</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="remote">remote</span> <span word="areas">areas</span>.</p><p> 错误：是否容易做生意，带来经济效益并不能够解释是否应该将公司或者工厂移到市郊去。因为文章只在乎是否能够解决住房和交通问题，至于其中的经济得失不在文章讨论之列。</p><p> 观点二：<span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="nearly">nearly</span> <span word="impossible">impossible</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="move">move</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="companies">companies</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="factories">factories</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="once">once</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="companies">companies</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="size">size</span>.</p><p> 错误：能不能够将工厂和公司移到市郊也不在文章讨论范围。题目很明显已经作出一个假设，就是把公司和工厂搬到市郊是完全有可能的，目前所关注的是这个做法是否可以解决住房和交通问题。</p>
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