雅思写作范文：提高道路安全需用重典
<p> 题目点评：</p><p> 如果你真正明白<span word="IELTS">IELTS</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="writing">writing</span>的套路，这道题就是在太好写了。典型的折衷式写法-四段式，大负小正，小的方面放在前面写。具体说：</p><p> 开头段+主体段1承认更严厉的惩罚是有效办法之一+主体段2提出还有其他的办法也必须要一起执行才可以+结尾段总结。<span word="Thesis">Thesis</span> <span word="statement">statement</span> 和 <span word="topic">topic</span> <span word="sentences">sentences</span> 在范文里用下划线标明。理由用<span word="TM">TM</span> <span word="STREEC">STREEC</span> $体系解决，全程使用模板，22分钟在笔记本上完成创作。</p><p> 高分关键词：<span word="car">car</span> <span word="ownership">ownership</span>汽车占有量 <span word="incidence">incidence</span> 发生率 <span word="car">car</span> <span word="wrecks">wrecks</span> 撞车 <span word="perpetrators">perpetrators</span> 肇事者 <span word="stiff">stiff</span> <span word="punishment">punishment</span>/<span word="severe">severe</span> <span word="punishment">punishment</span>/ <span word="harsh">harsh</span> <span word="penalty">penalty</span> 严厉的惩罚 <span word="halt">halt</span>/<span word="curb">curb</span> 遏制 <span word="rampant">rampant</span> 猖獗的 <span word="apprehensive">apprehensive</span> 形容词，对有所顾忌的 <span word="surveillance">surveillance</span> <span word="camera">camera</span> 监控摄像头 <span word="promulgate">promulgate</span> 颁布 <span word="hazard">hazard</span> <span word="forestall">forestall</span>=<span word="prevent">prevent</span> 预防 <span word="pedestrian">pedestrian</span> 行人</p><p> <span word="jaywalk">jaywalk</span> 违章横穿马路 <span word="circumvent">circumvent</span> 规避 <span word="the">the</span> <span word="law">law</span> <span word="enforcement">enforcement</span>执法 <span word="draconian">draconian</span>严厉的 <span word="lax">lax</span> 松懈的</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="soaring">soaring</span> <span word="car">car</span> <span word="ownership">ownership</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="China">China</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="thrown">thrown</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="sharp">sharp</span> <span word="relief">relief</span>. <span word="According">According</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="research">research</span> <span word="conducted">conducted</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="Chinas">Chinas</span> <span word="Ministry">Ministry</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Transportation">Transportation</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="annual">annual</span> <span word="incidence">incidence</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="car">car</span> <span word="wrecks">wrecks</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="nearly">nearly</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="times">times</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="corresponding">corresponding</span> <span word="figure">figure</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="decade">decade</span> <span word="ago">ago</span>. <span word="Many">Many</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="alarmed">alarmed</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="trend">trend</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="assert">assert</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="imposing">imposing</span> <span word="stiffer">stiffer</span> <span word="punishment">punishment</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="perpetrators">perpetrators</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="effective">effective</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="curb">curb</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="disturbing">disturbing</span> <span word="phenomenon">phenomenon</span>. <span word="Speaking">Speaking</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="myself">myself</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="tend">tend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="merit">merit</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="demerit">demerit</span>.</p>
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