雅思写作7分范文：违章惩罚有助维护道路安全吗？
<p> <span word="Whether">Whether</span> <span word="stricter">stricter</span> <span word="punishments">punishments</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="prevent">prevent</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="happening">happening</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="roads">roads</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="triggered">triggered</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="controversial">controversial</span> <span word="debate">debate</span> <span word="Attitudes">Attitudes</span> <span word="towards">towards</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="vary">vary</span> <span word="greatly">greatly</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="wiser">wiser</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="closer">closer</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="sides">sides</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="present">present</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>.</p><p> <span word="Advocates">Advocates</span> <span word="firmly">firmly</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="sensible">sensible</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="impose">impose</span> <span word="stricter">stricter</span> <span word="penalty">penalty</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="break">break</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="rules">rules</span>. <span word="Drivers">Drivers</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="careful">careful</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="punishment">punishment</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="afford">afford</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fine">fine</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="high">high</span>,<span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="deterrent">deterrent</span> . <span word="According">According</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="survey">survey</span> , <span word="among">among</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="drivers">drivers</span> <span word="questioned">questioned</span> , 65% <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="admit">admit</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="driving">driving</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="serious">serious</span> <span word="punishments">punishments</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="carried">carried</span> <span word="out">out</span> .</p><p> <span word="Opponents">Opponents</span>, <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="aspects">aspects</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="decrease">decrease</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="frequency">frequency</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span>. <span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>, <span word="road">road</span> <span word="constructions">constructions</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="rational">rational</span>. <span word="Nowadays">Nowadays</span>, <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="roads">roads</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="highways">highways</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="built">built</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="designed">designed</span> <span word="appropriately">appropriately</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="sometimes">sometimes</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span>. <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="pedestrians">pedestrians</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="heighten">heighten</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="safety">safety</span> <span word="awareness">awareness</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="crossing">crossing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="roads">roads</span> . <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="pedestrians">pedestrians</span> <span word="disobey">disobey</span> <span word="rules">rules</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="regulations">regulations</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="assume">assume</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="responsibilities">responsibilities</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="penalized">penalized</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="least">least</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="growing">growing</span> <span word="amount">amount</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="private">private</span> <span word="cars">cars</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="contributing">contributing</span> <span word="factor">factor</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="government">government</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="feasible">feasible</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="control">control</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="cars">cars</span> ., <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="imposing">imposing</span> <span word="higher">higher</span> <span word="tax">tax</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="limiting">limiting</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cars">cars</span> <span word="running">running</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="roads">roads</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="rush">rush</span> <span word="hours">hours</span> .</p><p> <span word="As">As</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="favor">favor</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="latter">latter</span> <span word="view">view</span>. <span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="stricter">stricter</span> <span word="punishment">punishment</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="insufficient">insufficient</span> <span word="access">access</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="decrease">decrease</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span>., <span word="other">other</span> <span word="methods">methods</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="enforced">enforced</span> <span word="simultaneously">simultaneously</span> , <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="reinforcing">reinforcing</span> <span word="supervising">supervising</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="setting">setting</span> <span word="digital">digital</span> <span word="camera">camera</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="roads">roads</span> .</p>
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