雅思写作范文批改：现代技术对人的影响
<p> <span word="Modern">Modern</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="influence">influence</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="peoples">peoples</span> <span word="entertainment">entertainment</span> <span word="choices">choices</span>, <span word="making">making</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="creative">creative</span>. <span word="Co">Co</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>?</p><p> <span word="Modern">Modern</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="influence">influence</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="peoples">peoples</span> <span word="entertainment">entertainment</span> <span word="choices">choices</span>, <span word="making">making</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="creative">creative</span>. <span word="Do">Do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>?</p><p> <span word="Bearing">Bearing</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="mind">mind</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="effects">effects</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="entertainments">entertainments</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="todays">todays</span> <span word="users">users</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="important">important</span>, <span word="because">because</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="discussed">discussed</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="nowadays">nowadays</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="private">private</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="sectors">sectors</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="does">does</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="aspects">aspects</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="society">society</span>? <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="answer">answer</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="contrary">contrary</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="see">see</span>, <span word="current">current</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="undermining">undermining</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="peoples">peoples</span> <span word="creative">creative</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="providing">providing</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span> <span word="sorted">sorted</span> <span word="ways">ways</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="relaxation">relaxation</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="effects">effects</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="entertainment">entertainment</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="today">today</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="important">important</span>, <span word="because">because</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="discussed">discussed</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="private">private</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="sectors">sectors</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="does">does</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="aspects">aspects</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="society">society</span>? <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="answer">answer</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="negative">negative</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="see">see</span>, <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="undermines">undermines</span> <span word="peoples">peoples</span> <span word="creative">creative</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="providing">providing</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span> <span word="pre">pre</span>-<span word="digested">digested</span> <span word="forms">forms</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="relaxation">relaxation</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span> , <span word="it">it</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="known">known</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="latest">latest</span> <span word="resources">resources</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="prefer">prefer</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="high">high</span>-<span word="tech">tech</span> <span word="ways">ways</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="recreation">recreation</span>. <span word="More">More</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="works">works</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="pressuarable">pressuarable</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="turn">turn</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="supposed">supposed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="providing">providing</span> <span word="convenient">convenient</span>, <span word="time">time</span>-<span word="saving">saving</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="fresh">fresh</span> <span word="entertainment">entertainment</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="fewer">fewer</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="fewer">fewer</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span> <span word="choose">choose</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="play">play</span> <span word="jigsaws">jigsaws</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="exquisite">exquisite</span> <span word="handicrafts">handicrafts</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="expand">expand</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="imaginary">imaginary</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="creative">creative</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="spare">spare</span> <span word="time">time</span>.</p>
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