雅思写作范文：如何面对永不消失的垃圾
<p> 题目讲评：</p><p> 典型的<span word="argumentation">argumentation</span>+<span word="report">report</span>,写四段，第二段顺着观点讲现象产生的原因，第三段将解决办法。</p><p> <span word="Essay">Essay</span> <span word="Question">Question</span>: 8/6</p><p> <span word="Many">Many</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="developed">developed</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="throw">throw</span>-<span word="away">away</span> <span word="society">society</span>, <span word="because">because</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="filling">filling</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="environment">environment</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="plastic">plastic</span> <span word="bags">bags</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="rubbish">rubbish</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="fully">fully</span> <span word="dispose">dispose</span> <span word="of">of</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="measures">measures</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="recommend">recommend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="problem">problem</span>?</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="present">present</span>-<span word="day">day</span> <span word="society">society</span>, <span word="plastic">plastic</span> <span word="containers">containers</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="utensils">utensils</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="extensively">extensively</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="big">big</span> <span word="cities">cities</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="countryside">countryside</span> <span word="alike">alike</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="ubiquitous">ubiquitous</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="hazard">hazard</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="guess">guess</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="seen">seen</span>, <span word="at">at</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="another">another</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="unsightly">unsightly</span> <span word="scene">scene</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="plastic">plastic</span> <span word="bags">bags</span> <span word="swirling">swirling</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="wind">wind</span>. <span word="These">These</span> <span word="plastic">plastic</span> <span word="shopping">shopping</span> <span word="bags">bags</span>, <span word="chopsticks">chopsticks</span>, <span word="to">to</span>-<span word="go">go</span> <span word="boxes">boxes</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="mineral">mineral</span>-<span word="water">water</span> <span word="bottles">bottles</span>, <span word="to">to</span> <span word="name">name</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="few">few</span>, <span word="when">when</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="properly">properly</span> <span word="disposed">disposed</span> <span word="of">of</span>, <span word="create">create</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="colossal">colossal</span> <span word="amount">amount</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="non">non</span>-<span word="biodegradable">biodegradable</span> <span word="refuse">refuse</span>. <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="some">some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="argue">argue</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="embarked">embarked</span> <span word="upon">upon</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="throw">throw</span>-<span word="away">away</span> <span word="era">era</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="plastic">plastic</span> <span word="trash">trash</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="largely">largely</span> <span word="dumped">dumped</span> <span word="indiscriminately">indiscriminately</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="irresponsibly">irresponsibly</span> . <span word="Personally">Personally</span> , <span word="I">I</span> <span word="wholeheartedly">wholeheartedly</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="view">view</span>.</p><p> <span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="numerous">numerous</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="worrisome">worrisome</span> <span word="phenomenon">phenomenon</span> <span word="coming">coming</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="being">being</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span> , <span word="at">at</span> <span word="present">present</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bulk">bulk</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="shop">shop</span> <span word="and">and</span>/<span word="or">or</span> <span word="eat">eat</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="regularly">regularly</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="poorly">poorly</span>-<span word="informed">informed</span>, <span word="uninformed">uninformed</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="misinformed">misinformed</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="pernicious">pernicious</span> <span word="influence">influence</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="non">non</span>-<span word="biodegradable">biodegradable</span> <span word="pollutants">pollutants</span> <span word="exert">exert</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ecosystem">ecosystem</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="main">main</span> <span word="culprit">culprit</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="global">global</span>-<span word="scale">scale</span> <span word="mishandling">mishandling</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="plastic">plastic</span> <span word="wastes">wastes</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="chief">chief</span> <span word="component">component</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="trash">trash</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="polythene">polythene</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="decompose">decompose</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="landfill">landfill</span> <span word="sites">sites</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="process">process</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="hundreds">hundreds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="scientific">scientific</span> <span word="breakthrough">breakthrough</span> <span word="comes">comes</span> <span word="along">along</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="polythene">polythene</span> <span word="treatment">treatment</span>. <span word="Thus">Thus</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="trash">trash</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="dealt">dealt</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="collectively">collectively</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="scattered">scattered</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="tumbleweeds">tumbleweeds</span>. <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="proliferation">proliferation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="plastic">plastic</span> <span word="shopping">shopping</span> <span word="bags">bags</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="eating">eating</span> <span word="ware">ware</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="largely">largely</span> <span word="fuelled">fuelled</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="surging">surging</span>, <span word="headlong">headlong</span> <span word="consumerism">consumerism</span>. <span word="Plastic">Plastic</span> <span word="containers">containers</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="utensils">utensils</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="lighter">lighter</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="weight">weight</span>, <span word="cheaper">cheaper</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="price">price</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="water">water</span>-<span word="resistant">resistant</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="performance">performance</span>. <span word="These">These</span> <span word="superior">superior</span> <span word="properties">properties</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="preferable">preferable</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="paper">paper</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="cloth">cloth</span> <span word="counterparts">counterparts</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="customers">customers</span> <span word="eyes">eyes</span>; <span word="and">and</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="consumer">consumer</span> <span word="satisfaction">satisfaction</span> <span word="reigns">reigns</span> <span word="supreme">supreme</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="contemporary">contemporary</span> <span word="society">society</span>, <span word="compared">compared</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="superb">superb</span> <span word="portability">portability</span>, <span word="affordability">affordability</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="utility">utility</span>, <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="dispose">dispose</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="thing">thing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="customers">customers</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span> <span word="about">about</span>. <span word="Additionally">Additionally</span>, <span word="plastic">plastic</span> <span word="bags">bags</span>, <span word="wrap">wrap</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="containers">containers</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="commercially">commercially</span> <span word="feasible">feasible</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="cheaper">cheaper</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="manufacture">manufacture</span>, <span word="ship">ship</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="store">store</span>. <span word="These">These</span> <span word="mercenary">mercenary</span> <span word="considerations">considerations</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="prompted">prompted</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="cloth">cloth</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="paper">paper</span> <span word="bags">bags</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="supplanted">supplanted</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="plastic">plastic</span> <span word="bags">bags</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="phasing">phasing</span>-<span word="out">out</span> <span word="process">process</span>, <span word="few">few</span> <span word="stores">stores</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="restaurants">restaurants</span> <span word="advocate">advocate</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="encourage">encourage</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="environmentallybenign">environmentallybenign</span> <span word="disposal">disposal</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="plastic">plastic</span> <span word="trash">trash</span>, <span word="hence">hence</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="whole">whole</span> <span word="slew">slew</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="non">non</span>-<span word="biodegradable">biodegradable</span> <span word="garbage">garbage</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="environmental">environmental</span> <span word="hazards">hazards</span> <span word="ensue">ensue</span>.</p>
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