雅思写作范文：存钱防老
<p> <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="responsibility">responsibility</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="save">save</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="retire">retire</span>. <span word="to">to</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span>?</p><p> 范文：</p><p> <span word="No">No</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sand">sand</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="together">together</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="island">island</span>. <span word="No">No</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="alienated">alienated</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rest">rest</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span>. <span word="Everyone">Everyone</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="relevance">relevance</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="diverse">diverse</span> <span word="aspects">aspects</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="varied">varied</span> <span word="scales">scales</span>. <span word="Thus">Thus</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="single">single</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="alive">alive</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="solely">solely</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="himselfhe">himselfhe</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="simultaneously">simultaneously</span> <span word="shouldering">shouldering</span> <span word="various">various</span> <span word="duties">duties</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="multifarious">multifarious</span> <span word="groups">groups</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span> ,<span word="namely">namely</span>, <span word="employers">employers</span> ,<span word="government">government</span> , <span word="who">who</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="turn">turn</span> <span word="undertake">undertake</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="duty">duty</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="caring">caring</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="here">here</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="deny">deny</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="necessity">necessity</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="saving">saving</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="life">life</span> , <span word="but">but</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="state">state</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="why">why</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="above">above</span> <span word="parties">parties</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="individual">individual</span>.</p><p> <span word="What">What</span> <span word="hits">hits</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="thought">thought</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="employers">employers</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="liability">liability</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> ,<span word="for">for</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="sacrificed">sacrificed</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="youth">youth</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="shed">shed</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="tears">tears</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="sweat">sweat</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="blood">blood</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="them">them</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="employers">employers</span> <span word="felt">felt</span> <span word="free">free</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="duties">duties</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="elderly">elderly</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> ,<span word="then">then</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="easy">easy</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="comfortable">comfortable</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="expel">expel</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="randomly">randomly</span>. <span word="No">No</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="legislation">legislation</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="possibly">possibly</span> <span word="tolerate">tolerate</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="happen">happen</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="employers">employers</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="duty">duty</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="later">later</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="life">life</span>.</p><p> <span word="Another">Another</span> <span word="party">party</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="government">government</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="nationality">nationality</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="tax">tax</span> <span word="levied">levied</span>/<span word="imposed">imposed</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="serve">serve</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="fight">fight</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="motherland">motherland</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="energy">energy</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="saw">saw</span> <span word="someone">someone</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="paid">paid</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="government">government</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="alienated">alienated</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="isolated">isolated</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="himself">himself</span>, <span word="how">how</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="rejuvenated">rejuvenated</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="hand">hand</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="tax">tax</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="sturdy">sturdy</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="face">face</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bayonet">bayonet</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="enemies">enemies</span>? <span word="So">So</span> <span word="undoubtedly">undoubtedly</span> <span word="governments">governments</span>, <span word="like">like</span> <span word="employers">employers</span> ,<span word="should">should</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span>.</p>
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