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雅思写作范文修改:游客是否该入乡随俗

<p>  原文:<span word="HLH">HLH</span>0220 修改:<span word="William">William</span>,雅思公主</p><p>  <span word="TOPIC">TOPIC</span>:<span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="visitors">visitors</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="countries">countries</span> <span word="shoud">shoud</span> <span word="follow">follow</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="customs">customs</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="behaviour">behaviour</span>. <span word="Others">Others</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="host">host</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="welcome">welcome</span> <span word="cultural">cultural</span> <span word="differences">differences</span>.</p><p>  <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="views">views</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>.</p><p>  原文:</p><p>  <span word="As">As</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="customs">customs</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="behaviour">behaviour</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="assimilation">assimilation</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="cultures">cultures</span> , <span word="these">these</span> <span word="arises">arises</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="contentious">contentious</span> <span word="discussion">discussion</span> . <span word="Before">Before</span> <span word="presenting">presenting</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="view">view</span> ,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="intend">intend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="discuss">discuss</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="sides">sides</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span>.</p><p>  <span word="Advocates">Advocates</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="cultures">cultures</span> <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="belief">belief</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="host">host</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="interacted">interacted</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="cultures">cultures</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span> ,<span word="tourism">tourism</span> <span word="helps">helps</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="introduce">introduce</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="foreigners">foreigners</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="showcase">showcase</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="brilliant">brilliant</span> <span word="history">history</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="culture">culture</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outside">outside</span> <span word="world">world</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span> ,<span word="tourists">tourists</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="countries">countries</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="bring">bring</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="cultures">cultures</span> , <span word="it">it</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="enhance">enhance</span> <span word="mutual">mutual</span> <span word="understanding">understanding</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="nations">nations</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="maintain">maintain</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="peace">peace</span> .<span word="Worst">Worst</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span> ,<span word="as">as</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="cross">cross</span>-<span word="cultural">cultural</span> <span word="communication">communication</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="increasingly">increasingly</span> <span word="frequent">frequent</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="cultural">cultural</span> <span word="assimilation">assimilation</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="penetration">penetration</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="inevitable">inevitable</span>.</p><p>  <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="people">people</span> ,<span word="however">however</span> ,<span word="are">are</span> <span word="strongly">strongly</span> <span word="against">against</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="host">host</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="access">access</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="diverses">diverses</span> <span word="cultures">cultures</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="sound">sound</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> .<span word="Primarily">Primarily</span> ,<span word="it">it</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="exert">exert</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="adverse">adverse</span> <span word="effects">effects</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="aboriginal">aboriginal</span> <span word="culture">culture</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="minority">minority</span> <span word="languages">languages</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> .<span word="Furthermore">Furthermore</span> ,<span word="cultural">cultural</span> <span word="globalization">globalization</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="homogenous">homogenous</span> <span word="global">global</span> <span word="culture">culture</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="everyone">everyone</span> <span word="speaks">speaks</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="thinks">thinks</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> .<span word="Last">Last</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span> ,<span word="globalization">globalization</span> <span word="poses">poses</span> <span word="potential">potential</span> <span word="risks">risks</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="preservation">preservation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="aboriginal">aboriginal</span> <span word="culture">culture</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="languages">languages</span> .</p>
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