雅思写作范文修改：传统文化在流失
<p> 题目：<span word="As">As</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="science">science</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="technologh">technologh</span>,<span word="some">some</span> <span word="aspects">aspects</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="traditional">traditional</span> <span word="culture">culture</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="lost">lost</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="traditional">traditional</span> <span word="culture">culture</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="technologh">technologh</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="replaced">replaced</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="science">science</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="internet">internet</span>, <span word="what">what</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>?</p><p> 原文：</p><p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="widely">widely</span> <span word="noted">noted</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="aspects">aspects</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="tradional">tradional</span> <span word="cuture">cuture</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="lost">lost</span> <span word="along">along</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="science">science</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="traditional">traditional</span> <span word="culture">culture</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="technologh">technologh</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="replaced">replaced</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="follows">follows</span>,</p><p> <span word="My">My</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="traditional">traditional</span> <span word="culture">culture</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="hindering">hindering</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="science">science</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="peoples">peoples</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="Traditional">Traditional</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="combines">combines</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="low">low</span> <span word="efficiency">efficiency</span>. <span word="Suppose">Suppose</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="scientists">scientists</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="using">using</span> <span word="cars">cars</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="abroad">abroad</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="attand">attand</span> <span word="meetings">meetings</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cloning">cloning</span> <span word="technique">technique</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="later">later</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="consequently">consequently</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="patient">patient</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="died">died</span>.</p><p> <span word="My">My</span> <span word="second">second</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="fees">fees</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="protect">protect</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="traditional">traditional</span> <span word="culture">culture</span>. <span word="Government">Government</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="huge">huge</span> <span word="amount">amount</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="rebuild">rebuild</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="decorate">decorate</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="buildings">buildings</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="built">built</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="ancestors">ancestors</span>, <span word="never">never</span> <span word="thinking">thinking</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="uselessness">uselessness</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="accomodation">accomodation</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="protect">protect</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="buildings">buildings</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="delivered">delivered</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="poor">poor</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="solve">solve</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="accomodation">accomodation</span> <span word="problem">problem</span>.</p><p> <span word="My">My</span> <span word="third">third</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="prefer">prefer</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="science">science</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="increasingly">increasingly</span> <span word="improved">improved</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="system">system</span>. <span word="Twenty">Twenty</span>-<span word="first">first</span> <span word="century">century</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="seen">seen</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="deal">deal</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="proportion">proportion</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="education">education</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="willing">willing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="science">science</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="instance">instance</span>, <span word="college">college</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="collect">collect</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="thesis">thesis</span> <span word="materials">materials</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="surfing">surfing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Internet">Internet</span> <span word="instead">instead</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="borrowing">borrowing</span> <span word="books">books</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="libraries">libraries</span>.</p>
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