雅思写作突破高分：7.5分样卷批改
<p> 一、剑桥雅思大作文真题</p><p> <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="about">about</span> 40 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="task">task</span>.</p><p> <span word="Write">Write</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="topic">topic</span>:</p><p> <span word="Today">Today</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="popular">popular</span> <span word="consumer">consumer</span> <span word="goods">goods</span> <span word="reflect">reflect</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="power">power</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="real">real</span> <span word="needs">needs</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="sold">sold</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span>?</p><p> <span word="Give">Give</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="answer">answer</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="include">include</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="relevant">relevant</span> <span word="examples">examples</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>.</p><p> <span word="Write">Write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 250 <span word="words">words</span>.</p><p> 二、雅思考生7.5分样卷</p><p> <span word="Nowadays">Nowadays</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="lots">lots</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="advertisements">advertisements</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="television">television</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="streets">streets</span>. <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span> <span word="boosts">boosts</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="goods">goods</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="encourages">encourages</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="buy">buy</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="unnecessarily">unnecessarily</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="arguments">arguments</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="true">true</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="country">country</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span> <span word="companies">companies</span> <span word="produce">produce</span> <span word="advertisements">advertisements</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="famous">famous</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="popular">popular</span> <span word="actors">actors</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="singers">singers</span>. <span word="People">People</span>, <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="youngsters">youngsters</span>, <span word="buy">buy</span> <span word="goods">goods</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="favourite">favourite</span> <span word="singer">singer</span> <span word="advertise">advertise</span>, <span word="although">although</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="products">products</span>.</p><p> <span word="Also">Also</span>, <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="television">television</span> <span word="screen">screen</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="product">product</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="gorgeous">gorgeous</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="quality">quality</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="it">it</span>, <span word="people">people</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="buy">buy</span> <span word="goods">goods</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="enough">enough</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>. <span word="Consumers">Consumers</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="actually">actually</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="buy">buy</span> <span word="goods">goods</span> <span word="impulsively">impulsively</span> <span word="soon">soon</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="watch">watch</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span>. <span word="Furthermore">Furthermore</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="customers">customers</span> <span word="buy">buy</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="particular">particular</span> <span word="product">product</span> <span word="due">due</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span> <span word="campaign">campaign</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="affected">affected</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="trend">trend</span>, <span word="even">even</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="product">product</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="real">real</span> <span word="needs">needs</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span>.</p>
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