雅思写作跑题范文评析：孩子沉迷电视
<p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="true">true</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="children">children</span>, <span word="from">from</span> <span word="below">below</span> 3 <span word="to">to</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="school">school</span>, <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="watching">watching</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="range">range</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="programs">programs</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="videos">videos</span>. <span word="One">One</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="obvious">obvious</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="attractive">attractive</span>, <span word="vivid">vivid</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="touching">touching</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="lives">lives</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="curious">curious</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="resist">resist</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="temptation">temptation</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="all">all</span>.</p><p> <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span>, <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="parents">parents</span>, <span word="argue">argue</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="damaging">damaging</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="probably">probably</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="pointing">pointing</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="limited">limited</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="self">self</span>-<span word="control">control</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="self">self</span>-<span word="principle">principle</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="easily">easily</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="watching">watching</span> <span word="instead">instead</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="back">back</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="while">while</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="this">this</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="aware">aware</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="amount">amount</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="violence">violence</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="unhealthy">unhealthy</span> <span word="pictures">pictures</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="filled">filled</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="videos">videos</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="simple">simple</span> <span word="watch">watch</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="amount">amount</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="correct">correct</span> <span word="guidance">guidance</span>, <span word="some">some</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="easily">easily</span> <span word="break">break</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="laws">laws</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="realistic">realistic</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="imitating">imitating</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="details">details</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="crimes">crimes</span>.</p><p> <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="others">others</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="disbelieve">disbelieve</span> <span word="watching">watching</span> <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="video">video</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="programs">programs</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="amount">amount</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="videos">videos</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="fully">fully</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="outside">outside</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="relax">relax</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="stressful">stressful</span> <span word="brains">brains</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="intense">intense</span> <span word="study">study</span>. <span word="Obviously">Obviously</span>, <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="watch">watch</span> <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="wider">wider</span> <span word="range">range</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="understandings">understandings</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span>. <span word="All">All</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="beneficial">beneficial</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="childrens">childrens</span> <span word="growth">growth</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="future">future</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="life">life</span>.</p><p> <span word="Overall">Overall</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="watching">watching</span> <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="videos">videos</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="information">information</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="ensure">ensure</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="watch">watch</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="long">long</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Government">Government</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="harsh">harsh</span> <span word="warning">warning</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="media">media</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="overuse">overuse</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="unhealthy">unhealthy</span> <span word="contents">contents</span>.</p>
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