雅思写作满分范文欣赏：全球化
<p> 在雅思班，我惊喜的发现我教了十年雅思，居然碰到了难得一见的9分文章，我给了几位前任的<span word="IELTS">IELTS</span> <span word="Examiner">Examiner</span>打了分数，都给出了9分。我们来欣赏一下：</p><p> 范文：</p><p> <span word="Globalization">Globalization</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="declarationof">declarationof</span> <span word="war">war</span> <span word="upon">upon</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="cultures">cultures</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="culture">culture</span> <span word="wars">wars</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="exemption">exemption</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="civilians">civilians</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="innocent">innocent</span> <span word="bystanders">bystanders</span>. <span word="Why">Why</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="expected">expected</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="ancient">ancient</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="rooted">rooted</span> <span word="civilizations">civilizations</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="going">going</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="peripheralisationwithout">peripheralisationwithout</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="struggle">struggle</span>? <span word="The">The</span> <span word="answer">answer</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="globalization">globalization</span> <span word="carries">carries</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="implicit">implicit</span> <span word="promise">promise</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="relieve">relieve</span> <span word="poverty">poverty</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="securityperhaps">securityperhaps</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="ancient">ancient</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="dreams">dreams</span>. <span word="Because">Because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="power">power</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="global">global</span> <span word="capitalism">capitalism</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="create">create</span> <span word="wealth">wealth</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="assumed">assumed</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="priority">priority</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="sweep">sweep</span> <span word="aside">aside</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="preoccupations">preoccupations</span>, <span word="including">including</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="existing">existing</span> <span word="institutions">institutions</span>, <span word="interpretations">interpretations</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="searches">searches</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="meaning">meaning</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span>.</p><p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="disingenuous">disingenuous</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="assume">assume</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="economy">economy</span>, <span word="society">society</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="culture">culture</span> <span word="operate">operate</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="separate">separate</span> <span word="spheres">spheres</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="suggests">suggests</span> <span word="that">that</span>, <span word="one">one</span>, <span word="exposed">exposed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="globalizing">globalizing</span> <span word="imperative">imperative</span>, <span word="no">no</span> <span word="aspect">aspect</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="life">life</span>, <span word="customary">customary</span> <span word="practice">practice</span>, <span word="traditionalbehaviour">traditionalbehaviour</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="remain">remain</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span>.</p><p> <span word="There">There</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span>, <span word="broadly">broadly</span>, <span word="two">two</span> <span word="principal">principal</span> <span word="responses">responses</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="call">call</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fatalistic">fatalistic</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="resistant">resistant</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="significant">significant</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="fatalistic">fatalistic</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="leaders">leaders</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="G">G</span>-7, <span word="Ex">Ex</span>-<span word="President">President</span> <span word="Clinton">Clinton</span> <span word="said">said</span> <span word="globalization">globalization</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="policy">policy</span> <span word="choice">choice</span> <span word="Tony">Tony</span> <span word="Blair">Blair</span> <span word="said">said</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="inevitable">inevitable</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="irreversible">irreversible</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="considered">considered</span> <span word="paradoxical">paradoxical</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="leaders">leaders</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="dynamic">dynamic</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="expanding">expanding</span> <span word="economies">economies</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="passive">passive</span>, <span word="unchallenging">unchallenging</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="are">are</span>, <span word="after">after</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="human">human</span>-<span word="made">made</span> <span word="arrangements">arrangements</span>. <span word="These">These</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="richest">richest</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="proactive">proactive</span> <span word="regimes">regimes</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="wage">wage</span> <span word="endless">endless</span> <span word="war">war</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="abstraction">abstraction</span>, <span word="that">that</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="terror">terror</span>, <span word="topple">topple</span> <span word="regimes">regimes</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="lay">lay</span> <span word="down">down</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="WTO">WTO</span> <span word="law">law</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span>. <span word="Is">Is</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="helplessness">helplessness</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="presence">presence</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="mighty">mighty</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="cultural">cultural</span> <span word="powers">powers</span>?</p>
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