雅思写作题目分析：保护野生动物的花费
<p> 多数考生都反映作文分能拿到六分就已经很开心了，那么什么样的作文能拿到六分?写作最重要的一点，不偏题!下面就怎样正确审题提点自己的看法。<span word="Now">Now</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="spending">spending</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="protecting">protecting</span> <span word="wildanimals">wildanimals</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="spent">spent</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="population">population</span>. <span word="Do">Do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span>?目前很多人认为我们在保护野生动物上花费得太多，这些钱如果用在人身上会更好。你赞成还是反对?</p><p> 题目分析：</p><p> 本题为近期考到的另一道考题，题目把保护动物和促进人类发展两个表面矛盾的目的对立起来。如果深入考虑这两个目的，我们可以发现动物保护和人类发展之间虽然相互独立，但并不矛盾。考生可以分别陈述、论证保护野生动物的理由，最后再加以归纳。也可以采取相反的论点并加以论证。</p><p> 有的同学在论述支持野生动物保护的论点中提到：<span word="Scientists">Scientists</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="body">body</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="kinds">kinds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="animal">animal</span> <span word="contains">contains</span> <span word="genes">genes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="similar">similar</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="humanbeing">humanbeing</span> <span word="sand">sand</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="treat">treat</span> <span word="diseases">diseases</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="future">future</span>.</p><p> 考生如果继续探讨动物基因和人基因的相似性，就偏离了题目要求的重心。应该考虑的重点要遵循：因为动物基因对治疗人类疾病可能有帮助，所以保护野生动物是有益的，反之则可能对人类自身产生负面影响这个大思路。</p>
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