雅思写作范文评析：上学前需要工作或旅行吗？
<p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="seemingly">seemingly</span> <span word="constructive">constructive</span> <span word="proposal">proposal</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="accomplished">accomplished</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="career">career</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="encouraged">encouraged</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="travel">travel</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="warmly">warmly</span> <span word="accepted">accepted</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="educationists">educationists</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ground">ground</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="policy">policy</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="growth">growth</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="run">run</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="oppose">oppose</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="idea">idea</span>, <span word="saying">saying</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="measure">measure</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unnecessary">unnecessary</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="advantages">advantages</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="generated">generated</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="complimentary">complimentary</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="college">college</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="follows">follows</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="shall">shall</span> <span word="discuss">discuss</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="pros">pros</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="cons">cons</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="policy">policy</span>.</p><p> <span word="Those">Those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="measure">measure</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="travelling">travelling</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="formal">formal</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="education">education</span>. <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="broadly">broadly</span> <span word="acquainted">acquainted</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span>, <span word="deepen">deepen</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="understanding">understanding</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outside">outside</span> <span word="world">world</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="thus">thus</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="coordinate">coordinate</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="objectives">objectives</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="learning">learning</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="needs">needs</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="contrast">contrast</span>, <span word="by">by</span> <span word="immediate">immediate</span> <span word="entrance">entrance</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="steer">steer</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="direction">direction</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="display">display</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="combination">combination</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="theory">theory</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="practice">practice</span>. <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="study">study</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="exausting">exausting</span>, <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="win">win</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="admission">admission</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="grant">grant</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="relatively">relatively</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="period">period</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="relaxation">relaxation</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="buffer">buffer</span>, <span word="say">say</span>, <span word="travelling">travelling</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="year">year</span>, <span word="to">to</span> <span word="loosen">loosen</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="chords">chords</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="brain">brain</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="back">back</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="later">later</span> <span word="again">again</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="completely">completely</span> <span word="refreshed">refreshed</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="rejuvenated">rejuvenated</span>.</p><p> <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opposite">opposite</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="stick">stick</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="usual">usual</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="course">course</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="cite">cite</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="proper">proper</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="proper">proper</span> <span word="thing">thing</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="golden">golden</span> <span word="period">period</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="advanced">advanced</span> <span word="learning">learning</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="simply">simply</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="afford">afford</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="squandering">squandering</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="cast">cast</span> <span word="doubt">doubt</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="kids">kids</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="gain">gain</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="questioning">questioning</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fledglings">fledglings</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="universities">universities</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="opportunities">opportunities</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="concern">concern</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="young">young</span>, <span word="innocent">innocent</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="immature">immature</span>, <span word="may">may</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="astray">astray</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="misled">misled</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="exposed">exposed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="trickily">trickily</span> <span word="alluring">alluring</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="worried">worried</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sophisticated">sophisticated</span> <span word="men">men</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="sit">sit</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="classrooms">classrooms</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="come">come</span> <span word="back">back</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="campus">campus</span>.</p>
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