探析雅思写作衔接手段的评分标准
<p> 在官方公布的写作评分描述中有一项<span word="Coherence">Coherence</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Cohesion">Cohesion</span> 。这一项是涉及要点最多，却最为广大教学工作者和学生所忽视的一项。该项目涉及三大要点：文章信息点安排、衔接手段和分段.其中分段在大作文的5分至7分的评分描述中被重点强调。</p><p> 本文将重点关注该项目中所提到的<span word="Cohesive">Cohesive</span> <span word="Device">Device</span>:。</p><p> <span word="Coherence">Coherence</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Cohesion">Cohesion</span> 的7分第二条原文：</p><p> <span word="Uses">Uses</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="range">range</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="cohesive">cohesive</span> <span word="devices">devices</span> <span word="appropriately">appropriately</span> <span word="although">although</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="uner">uner</span>-/<span word="over">over</span>-<span word="use">use</span></p><p> 6分第二条原文为：</p><p> <span word="Uses">Uses</span> <span word="cohesive">cohesive</span> <span word="devices">devices</span> <span word="effectively">effectively</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="cohesion">cohesion</span> <span word="within">within</span> <span word="and">and</span>/<span word="or">or</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="sentences">sentences</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="faulty">faulty</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="mechanical">mechanical</span>;</p><p> 6分第三条提到：</p><p> <span word="May">May</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="referencing">referencing</span> <span word="clearly">clearly</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="appropriately">appropriately</span></p><p> 与之对应的5分第二条为：</p><p> <span word="Makes">Makes</span> <span word="inadequate">inadequate</span>, <span word="inaccurate">inaccurate</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="over">over</span>-<span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="cohesive">cohesive</span> <span word="devices">devices</span></p><p> 5 分第三条为：</p><p> <span word="May">May</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="repetitive">repetitive</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="lack">lack</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="referencing">referencing</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="substitution">substitution</span></p><p> 由以上所涉及到的原文可以看出，<span word="referencing">referencing</span>和<span word="substitution">substitution</span>都是<span word="cohesive">cohesive</span> <span word="device">device</span>的表现，而且是确定分值的重要参考标准。</p><p> 那么这里反复提到的<span word="Cohesive">Cohesive</span> <span word="Device">Device</span>究竟是什么呢?</p><p> <span word="Cohesive">Cohesive</span> <span word="Device">Device</span>:定义：</p><p> 能使信息的逻辑关系更清晰的各种英语字符。</p>
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