雅思写作的四个要点：用好连接词
<p> 第一、要用好表示顺序的连接词</p><p> 既然是流程图，就不可避免的要说明过程的各个步骤和先后顺序，在这里，大家要注意几个词。例如，表示过程我们通常用<span word="process">process</span>或<span word="procedure">procedure</span>，过程的各个阶段和步骤我们可以用<span word="stage">stage</span>或<span word="step">step</span>来描述。在谈到第一个步骤时我们可以用连接词<span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span>、<span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>、<span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="stage">stage</span>等引出。在进入中间的步骤时可以用<span word="Then">Then</span>、<span word="Next">Next</span>、<span word="After">After</span> <span word="this">this</span>/<span word="that">that</span>等，最后一个步骤可以用<span word="Finally">Finally</span>或<span word="Lastly">Lastly</span>。当然，如果有一些平行的步骤我们也可以用<span word="At">At</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="time">time</span>、<span word="Meanwhile">Meanwhile</span>等来引出。</p><p> 以上这些词如果用的太频繁也会使文章显得较为单调，我们可以使用从句的方法使各个步骤的描写自然地衔接在一句话中。例如</p><p> <span word="When">When</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cleaning">cleaning</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="done">done</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bottles">bottles</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="conveyedto">conveyedto</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="glass">glass</span> <span word="factory">factory</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="cut">cut</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="glass">glass</span> <span word="pieces">pieces</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="then">then</span> <span word="poured">poured</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="furnace">furnace</span>.</p><p> 上面的句子用了<span word="when">when</span>/<span word="where">where</span>/<span word="which">which</span>三个连词，就把玻璃瓶回收的三个步骤<span word="cleaning">cleaning</span>- <span word="cutting">cutting</span> <span word="heating">heating</span>巧妙地连接在了一起。</p><p> 第二、要学会使用被动语态</p><p> 流程图写好的第二个关键是被动语态的使用。流程图表现的是客观的工作流程或事物发展的过程。因此，我们可以尽量避免用<span word="We">We</span> <span word="should">should</span>/<span word="must">must</span>/<span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="sth">sth</span>.的主动语态，改为<span word="Sth">Sth</span>. <span word="Should">Should</span>/<span word="must">must</span>/<span word="needs">needs</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="done">done</span>这样的被动语态。被动语态和情态动词的恰当搭配，可以使文章显得更具有客观、和学术化色彩。</p>
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