雅思写作范文赏析：留学的利弊
<p> 下面雅思为大家整理了雅思写作范文赏析：留学的利弊，供考生们参考，以下是详细内容。</p><p> <span word="Nowadays">Nowadays</span> <span word="sending">sending</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="boarding">boarding</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="increasingly">increasingly</span> <span word="popular">popular</span>. <span word="What">What</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reason">reason</span>?</p><p> <span word="Do">Do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="positive">positive</span> <span word="development">development</span>?</p><p> 典型的混合类题目，我处理成了五段式，<span word="body">body</span>1先回答引发的原因, <span word="body">body</span>2 <span word="body">body</span>3 一段说<span word="positive">positive</span>，一段说<span word="negative">negative</span></p><p> 开头段处理成考官式的开头。</p><p> <span word="Body">Body</span>3 在说<span word="boarding">boarding</span> <span word="school">school</span>的坏处时，因为时间关系，写的非常简短，在一定程度上会影响我在<span word="TR">TR</span>项的得分。</p><p> 结尾处有点仓促。</p><p> 范文一：</p><p> <span word="With">With</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rapid">rapid</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="economy">economy</span>, <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="busy">busy</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="work">work</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="limited">limited</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="shared">shared</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="children">children</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span>, <span word="sending">sending</span> <span word="youngsters">youngsters</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="boarding">boarding</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="relatively">relatively</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="balance">balance</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="family">family</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="trend">trend</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="involve">involve</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="stiff">stiff</span> <span word="competition">competition</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="pressure">pressure</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="big">big</span> <span word="cities">cities</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="country">country</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="forced">forced</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="work">work</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="survive">survive</span>, <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="life">life</span>, <span word="leading">leading</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lack">lack</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="parenting">parenting</span>. <span word="Consequently">Consequently</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="boarding">boarding</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="easier">easier</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="urbanites">urbanites</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="cope">cope</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="efficiently">efficiently</span>. <span word="By">By</span> <span word="contrast">contrast</span>, <span word="without">without</span> <span word="sending">sending</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="boarding">boarding</span> <span word="school">school</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="efficiency">efficiency</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="tend">tend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="affected">affected</span>.</p>
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