细数让你的作文“见官死”的雅思写作开头
<p> 下面雅思为大家整理了细数让你的作文见官死的雅思写作开头，供考生们参考，以下是详细内容。</p><p> 雅思写作见官死开头：过分简单 没有重点 </p><p> 典型失败案例：</p><p> <span word="Topic">Topic</span>-<span word="The">The</span> <span word="importance">importance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="environmental">environmental</span> <span word="protection">protection</span></p><p> <span word="This">This</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="surely">surely</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="important">important</span>, <span word="lets">lets</span> <span word="talk">talk</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="it">it</span>!</p><p> 雅思写作见官死开头：用词不当 表达不准 </p><p> 典型失败案例：</p><p> <span word="Topic">Topic</span>-<span word="Should">Should</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="married">married</span>?</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="married">married</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="cant">cant</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="responsibility">responsibility</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="form">form</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="family">family</span>.</p><p> 雅思写作见官死开头：意思重复 原地踏步 </p><p> 典型失败案例：</p><p> <span word="Topic">Topic</span>-<span word="Your">Your</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="DINK">DINK</span> <span word="families">families</span></p><p> <span word="My">My</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="DINK">DINK</span> <span word="families">families</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="DINK">DINK</span> <span word="families">families</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="brings">brings</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="sometimes">sometimes</span> <span word="harmful">harmful</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="society">society</span>.</p><p> 雅思写作见官死开头：中国俗语 胡乱翻译 </p><p> 典型失败案例：</p><p> <span word="Topic">Topic</span> 1-<span word="Is">Is</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="family">family</span>?</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="family">family</span>. <span word="Because">Because</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sentence">sentence</span>: <span word="Many">Many</span> <span word="sons">sons</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="lucks">lucks</span></p><p> 正确说法：<span word="Happiness">Happiness</span> <span word="lies">lies</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="having">having</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="children">children</span></p>
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