实例分析雅思写作中的经典错误
<p> 下面雅思为大家整理了实例分析雅思写作中的经典错误,供考生们参考,以下是详细内容。</p><p> 一. 不一致</p><p> 所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致,它还包括了数的不一致 时态不一致及代词不一 致等.</p><p> 例1. <span word="when">when</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="money">money</span> ,<span word="he">he</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> .</p><p> 剖析:<span word="one">one</span>是单数第三人称,因而本句的<span word="have">have</span>应改为<span word="has">has</span> ;同理,<span word="want">want</span>应改为<span word="wants">wants</span>.本句是典型的主谓不一致.</p><p> 改为: <span word="once">once</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="money">money</span> ,<span word="he">he</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="wants">wants</span></p><p> 二. 修饰语错位</p><p> 英语与汉语不同,同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置,句子的含义可能引起变化.对于这一点中国学生往往没有引起足够的重视,因而造成了不必要的误解.例1. <span word="i">i</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="i">i</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="i">i</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="outside">outside</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="campus">campus</span>.</p><p> 剖析:<span word="better">better</span>位置不当,应置于句末.</p><p> 三. 句子不完整</p><p> 在口语中,交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等,不完整的句子完全可以被理解.可是书面语就不同了,句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清,这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后,笔者又想加些补充说明时发生.</p><p> 例1. <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="ways">ways</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span>. <span word="for">for</span> <span word="example">example</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="tv">tv</span> ,<span word="radio">radio</span> ,<span word="newspaper">newspaper</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="on">on</span> .</p><p> 剖析:本句后半部分<span word="for">for</span> <span word="example">example</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="tv">tv</span> ,<span word="radio">radio</span> ,<span word="newspaper">newspaper</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="on">on</span> .不是一个完整的句子,仅为一些不连贯的词语,不能独立成句.</p>
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