雅思写作9分范文及点评：太空投资
<p> <span word="Almost">Almost</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="papers">papers</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="latest">latest</span> <span word="exciting">exciting</span> <span word="developments">developments</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="space">space</span> <span word="race">race</span>. <span word="Photographs">Photographs</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="regularly">regularly</span> <span word="flashed">flashed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="earth">earth</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="thousands">thousands</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="millions">millions</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="miles">miles</span> <span word="away">away</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="printed">printed</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="newspapers">newspapers</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="shown">shown</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="television">television</span> <span word="screens">screens</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="visible">visible</span> <span word="proof">proof</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mans">mans</span> <span word="newest">newest</span> <span word="achievements">achievements</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="photographs">photographs</span> <span word="neatly">neatly</span> <span word="sum">sum</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="results">results</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="massive">massive</span> <span word="efforts">efforts</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="conquer">conquer</span> <span word="space">space</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="exposed">exposed</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="absurdity">absurdity</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="undertaking">undertaking</span>. <span word="All">All</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="indistinguishable">indistinguishable</span> <span word="blob">blob</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="supposed">supposed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="represent">represent</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="planet">planet</span> <span word="seen">seen</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="thousand">thousand</span> <span word="miles">miles</span> <span word="away">away</span>. <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="going">going</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="end">end</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="moon">moon</span>-<span word="dust">dust</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="few">few</span> <span word="stones">stones</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="behind">behind</span> <span word="glass">glass</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="museum">museum</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="hardly">hardly</span> <span word="value">value</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="earth">earth</span> <span word="ca">ca</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="countless">countless</span> <span word="sights">sights</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="infinitely">infinitely</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="exciting">exciting</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="spectacular">spectacular</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="space">space</span> <span word="race">race</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="simply">simply</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="objective">objective</span> <span word="search">search</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="extension">extension</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="race">race</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="power">power</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="earth">earth</span>. <span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="wealthiest">wealthiest</span> <span word="nations">nations</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="compete">compete</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="name">name</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="pure">pure</span> <span word="scientific">scientific</span> <span word="research">research</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="reality">reality</span>, <span word="all">all</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="interested">interested</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="power">power</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="prestige">prestige</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="impress">impress</span> <span word="us">us</span>, <span word="their">their</span> <span word="spectators">spectators</span>, <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="magnificent">magnificent</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="strength">strength</span>. <span word="Man">Man</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="played">played</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="power">power</span> <span word="game">game</span> <span word="ever">ever</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="earth">earth</span>. <span word="Now">Now</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="playing">playing</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="played">played</span> <span word="before">before</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="space">space</span> <span word="race">race</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="aspect">aspect</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="age">age</span>-<span word="old">old</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="right">right</span>.</p><p> <span word="We">We</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="told">told</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="technological">technological</span> <span word="know">know</span>-<span word="how">how</span>, <span word="acquired">acquired</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="attempting">attempting</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="orbit">orbit</span>, <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="utilized">utilized</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="earth">earth</span>. <span word="but">but</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="space">space</span> <span word="race">race</span> <span word="done">done</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="relieve">relieve</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="suffering">suffering</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="earths">earths</span> <span word="starving">starving</span> <span word="millions">millions</span>? <span word="In">In</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="raised">raised</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="standard">standard</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="us">us</span>? <span word="As">As</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="layman">layman</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="practical">practical</span> <span word="results">results</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="expenditure">expenditure</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="efforts">efforts</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="negligible">negligible</span>. <span word="Thanks">Thanks</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="space">space</span> <span word="research">research</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="now">now</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="television">television</span> <span word="pictures">pictures</span> <span word="transmitted">transmitted</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="half">half</span>-<span word="way">way</span> <span word="across">across</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="globe">globe</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="housewife">housewife</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="non">non</span>-<span word="stick">stick</span> <span word="frying">frying</span>-<span word="pans">pans</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="kitchen">kitchen</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="whole">whole</span> <span word="thing">thing</span> <span word="becomes">becomes</span> <span word="utterly">utterly</span> <span word="absurd">absurd</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="overcomes">overcomes</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unlikely">unlikely</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="ever">ever</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="able">able</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="travel">travel</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="nearest">nearest</span> <span word="star">star</span>.</p>
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