雅思写作7.5分范文：国际交流的新语言
<p> 这篇文章是今年上海英联邦部的高分学员领奖时我让其回忆的一篇大作文，题目有一定的难度，但是他还是取得了7.5分的写作绝对高分。请大家重点看他的语言使用.</p><p> <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="language">language</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="invented">invented</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="countries">countries</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="international">international</span> <span word="communication">communication</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="advantages">advantages</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="outweigh">outweigh</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="disadvantages">disadvantages</span>?</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="contemporary">contemporary</span> <span word="world">world</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="pace">pace</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="globalization">globalization</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="advancing">advancing</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="meteoric">meteoric</span> <span word="speed">speed</span>. <span word="Accordingly">Accordingly</span>, <span word="some">some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="propose">propose</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lingua">lingua</span> <span word="franca">franca</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="contrived">contrived</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="conduct">conduct</span> <span word="international">international</span> <span word="communication">communication</span>; <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="people">people</span> <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="divergent">divergent</span> <span word="views">views</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="comes">comes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>. <span word="Personally">Personally</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="tend">tend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="meaningless">meaningless</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="simply">simply</span> <span word="compare">compare</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="merits">merits</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="drawbacks">drawbacks</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="inventing">inventing</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="universal">universal</span> <span word="language">language</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="sides">sides</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="ignorable">ignorable</span>.</p><p> <span word="Compelling">Compelling</span> <span word="arguments">arguments</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="languages">languages</span>, <span word="undoubtedly">undoubtedly</span>, <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="obstacles">obstacles</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="misunderstandings">misunderstandings</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="conversation">conversation</span>, <span word="restricting">restricting</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="native">native</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="communicate">communicate</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="foreigners">foreigners</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="contrast">contrast</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="universal">universal</span> <span word="language">language</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="bring">bring</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="convenience">convenience</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="life">life</span>, <span word="learning">learning</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="working">working</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="promote">promote</span> <span word="joint">joint</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="over">over</span>, <span word="smooth">smooth</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="talk">talk</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="nations">nations</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="drive">drive</span> <span word="societal">societal</span> <span word="advance">advance</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="college">college</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="expected">expected</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="longer">longer</span> <span word="rely">rely</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="mechanical">mechanical</span> <span word="translation">translation</span> <span word="software">software</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="downloading">downloading</span> <span word="foreign">foreign</span> <span word="essays">essays</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="material">material</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="companies">companies</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="economize">economize</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="budget">budget</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unnecessary">unnecessary</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hire">hire</span> <span word="simultaneous">simultaneous</span> <span word="interpreters">interpreters</span>. <span word="Meanwhile">Meanwhile</span>, <span word="foreign">foreign</span> <span word="countries">countries</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="accessible">accessible</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="travelers">travelers</span> <span word="due">due</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="longer">longer</span> <span word="fret">fret</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="cultural">cultural</span> <span word="shock">shock</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="linguistic">linguistic</span> <span word="obstacles">obstacles</span>. <span word="Consequently">Consequently</span>, <span word="contriving">contriving</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="fresh">fresh</span> <span word="language">language</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="sure">sure</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="produce">produce</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="countries">countries</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span>.</p>
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