雅思写作辅导：段落间的连贯手段
<p> 利用形容词比较级加<span word="Whats">Whats</span> <span word="more">more</span>来表示递进关系的段落承接;</p><p> <span word="What">What</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="more">more</span>,<span word="Chinais">Chinais</span> <span word="getting">getting</span> <span word="ever">ever</span> <span word="hungrier">hungrier</span> .</p><p> <span word="Whats">Whats</span> <span word="worse">worse</span>, <span word="whats">whats</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="obvious">obvious</span> , <span word="whats">whats</span> <span word="funnier">funnier</span>,</p><p> <span word="Whats">Whats</span> <span word="worse">worse</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="age">age</span> <span word="group">group</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="troubles">troubles</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="educational">educational</span> <span word="system">system</span>.</p><p> 利用反义词来表示转折。</p><p> <span word="Not">Not</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="observers">observers</span>, <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Chinas">Chinas</span> <span word="unstinting">unstinting</span> <span word="appetite">appetite</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="commodities">commodities</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="super">super</span>.</p><p> <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="imported">imported</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="making">making</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="better">better</span>.</p><p> 评判上文表示转折：</p><p> <span word="This">This</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="ignores">ignores</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="thatChinas">thatChinas</span> <span word="commodities">commodities</span> <span word="binge">binge</span> <span word="brings">brings</span>, <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="countries">countries</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="rich">rich</span> <span word="ones">ones</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="Australia">Australia</span>.</p><p> 用<span word="still">still</span>，<span word="however">however</span>等转折</p><p> <span word="Still">Still</span>,<span word="Chinas">Chinas</span> <span word="hunger">hunger</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="natural">natural</span> <span word="resources">resources</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="creating">creating</span> <span word="plenty">plenty</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>.</p><p> 前半句总结上文，下半句提出新观点。</p><p> <span word="That">That</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="sound">sound</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="minor">minor</span> <span word="change">change</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="implications">implications</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="dramatic">dramatic</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="nutrition">nutrition</span> <span word="concept">concept</span> <span word="sounds">sounds</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="persuading">persuading</span> <span word="point">point</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="hazards">hazards</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="obvious">obvious</span>.</p><p> 转折表递进：讲某事对别的事情的影响。</p><p> <span word="These">These</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="inconveniences">inconveniences</span> , <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="enormous">enormous</span> <span word="drag">drag</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="society">society</span>.</p><p> <span word="These">These</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="necessities">necessities</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="promotion">promotion</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="peoples">peoples</span> <span word="appearance">appearance</span> .</p>
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