雅思图表写作经典范文
<p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="chart">chart</span> <span word="below">below</span> <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="figures">figures</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="imprisonment">imprisonment</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="five">five</span> <span word="countries">countries</span> <span word="between">between</span> 1930 <span word="and">and</span> 1980.</p><p> <span word="Write">Write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="report">report</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="lecturer">lecturer</span> <span word="describing">describing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="shown">shown</span> <span word="below">below</span>.</p><p> 该图表对比的是1930-1980五十年间五个国家囚禁犯人的数据情况。</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="chart">chart</span> <span word="compares">compares</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="figures">figures</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="criminal">criminal</span> <span word="imprisonment">imprisonment</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="five">five</span> <span word="countries">countries</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="span">span</span> <span word="of">of</span> 50 <span word="years">years</span> <span word="from">from</span> 1930 <span word="to">to</span> 1980.</p><p> 总的来看，美国、加拿大、新西兰数据最为突出，而50年里，各国在这方面的数据都呈现了很大的波动性。</p><p> <span word="As">As</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="seen">seen</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="chart">chart</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="figures">figures</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="United">United</span> <span word="States">States</span>, <span word="Canada">Canada</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="New">New</span> <span word="Zealand">Zealand</span> <span word="stood">stood</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="significant">significant</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="designated">designated</span> <span word="countries">countries</span> <span word="revealed">revealed</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="dramatic">dramatic</span> <span word="changes">changes</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="imprisonment">imprisonment</span> <span word="figures">figures</span> <span word="across">across</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="board">board</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> 50 <span word="years">years</span>.</p><p> 首先，英国的监禁数据一直处于上升中。从1930年的30,000例逐渐增至1980年的85,000例，其中1940-1970年间增长最快。</p><p> <span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="imprisonment">imprisonment</span> <span word="figures">figures</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="UK">UK</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="steady">steady</span> <span word="rise">rise</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="in">in</span> 1930, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="were">were</span> 30,000 <span word="cases">cases</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="in">in</span> 1980, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="became">became</span> 85,000 <span word="cases">cases</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="period">period</span> <span word="during">during</span> 1940-1970 <span word="saw">saw</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fastest">fastest</span> <span word="increase">increase</span>.</p><p> 第二，澳大利亚和新西兰的状况有点相似，但没有新西兰起落幅度那么大。这里，我们看到1930年时，澳大利亚的数据是70,000例，而新西兰则高达近100,000例。接下来的1940年两国的数据都出现了很大的下降，特别是新西兰下降了接近45,000例。1950年，新西兰数据继续小幅度下降，澳大利亚则小幅上扬。之后的1960年里两国数据都大幅上扬，分别达到70,000例和78,000例。1970年出现了很有趣的一面：英国、澳大利亚、新西兰三国的数据持平在79,000例，接下来的1980年我们看到的则是澳大利亚的大幅下跌与新西兰的继续增长。</p>
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