雅思5.5分作文名师修改：学生是否该对老师打分
<p> 下面雅思为大家整理了雅思5.5分作文名师修改：学生是否该对老师打分，供考生们参考，以下是详细内容。</p><p> 题目：</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="qualityof">qualityof</span> <span word="education">education</span>, <span word="high">high</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="encouraged">encouraged</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="evaluate">evaluate</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="criticizetheir">criticizetheir</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="loss">loss</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="respect">respect</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="discipline">discipline</span>.</p><p> 学生是否该给老师的讲课打分的问题。思路：打分是有必要的，它可以帮助老师提高教学质量和沟通学生和老师之间的一些问题，但同时，应该给予老师客观，公正的评论，这样才不失老师应得的尊重</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="sides">sides</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>.</p><p> 作文：</p><p> 第一段:<span word="Educational">Educational</span> <span word="style">style</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="playing">playing</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span>/<span word="increasingly">increasingly</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="roles">roles</span>/<span word="role">role</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="contemporary">contemporary</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="exerting">exerting</span> <span word="profoundimpact">profoundimpact</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="meantime">meantime</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="enhance">enhance</span> <span word="educations">educations</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> , <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="inspired">inspired</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="cull">cull</span> <span word="deficiency">deficiency</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span> <span word="part">part</span>. <span word="Different">Different</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="various">various</span> <span word="viewpoints">viewpoints</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="essential">essential</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="examine">examine</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="side">side</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="presenting">presenting</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="viewpoint">viewpoint</span>.</p><p> <span word="Convincing">Convincing</span> <span word="arguments">arguments</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="real">real</span> <span word="esteem">esteem</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span> <span word="deficiency">deficiency</span> . <span word="Perhaps">Perhaps</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="primary">primary</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="whichever">whichever</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="giver">giver</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="person">person</span></p><p> <span word="Another">Another</span> <span word="contributing">contributing</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="insulting">insulting</span> <span word="behaviorthat">behaviorthat</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="criticize">criticize</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fundamental">fundamental</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="exists">exists</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="tradition">tradition</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="compliant">compliant</span> <span word="relation">relation</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span>. <span word="Teachers">Teachers</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="superiors">superiors</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="time">time</span>.</p>
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