雅思写作示范及技巧讲解（一）
<p> <span word="Task">Task</span> 1 :</p><p> <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="about">about</span> 20 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="task">task</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="tables">tables</span> <span word="below">below</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="results">results</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="research">research</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="examined">examined</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="average">average</span> <span word="percentage">percentage</span> <span word="marks">marks</span> <span word="scored">scored</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="boys">boys</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="girls">girls</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="ages">ages</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="subjects">subjects</span>. <span word="Write">Write</span> <span word="report">report</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="lecturer">lecturer</span> <span word="describing">describing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="below">below</span>.</p><p> <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="minimum">minimum</span> <span word="of">of</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span>.</p><p> <span word="Boys">Boys</span>：</p><p> <span word="Subject">Subject</span> <span word="Age">Age</span> <span word="Maths">Maths</span> <span word="Science">Science</span> <span word="Geography">Geography</span> <span word="Languages">Languages</span> <span word="Sports">Sports</span></p><p> 7 63% 70% 63% 62% 71%</p><p> 10 65% 72% 68% 60% 74%</p><p> 13 69% 74% 70% 60% 75%</p><p> 15 67% 73% 64% 58% 78%</p><p> <span word="Girls">Girls</span>:</p><p> <span word="Subject">Subject</span> <span word="Age">Age</span> <span word="Maths">Maths</span> <span word="Science">Science</span> <span word="Geography">Geography</span> <span word="Languages">Languages</span> <span word="Sports">Sports</span></p><p> 7 64% 69% 62% 62% 65%</p><p> 10 65% 73% 64% 67% 64%</p><p> 13 64% 70% 62% 65% 62%</p><p> 15 68% 72% 64% 75% 60%</p><p> 作者建议:</p><p> <span word="This">This</span> <span word="IELTS">IELTS</span> <span word="task">task</span> 1 <span word="example">example</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="difficult">difficult</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="presents">presents</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="data">data</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="significant">significant</span> <span word="trends">trends</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="data">data</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="overly">overly</span> <span word="obvious">obvious</span>. <span word="Lets">Lets</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="organising">organising</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="tables">tables</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="task">task</span> 1 <span word="answer">answer</span>.1. <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="aware">aware</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="variables">variables</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="data">data</span>: <span word="the">the</span> <span word="scores">scores</span> , <span word="the">the</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="subjects">subjects</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="age">age</span> <span word="groups">groups</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="gender">gender</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="sex">sex</span>.</p><p> 2. <span word="Now">Now</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="sort">sort</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="sort">sort</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="sense">sense</span>:<span word="a">a</span>.) <span word="The">The</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="thing">thing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="table">table</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="highest">highest</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="lowest">lowest</span> <span word="numbers">numbers</span>. <span word="Looking">Looking</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="tables">tables</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="boys">boys</span> <span word="tended">tended</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="score">score</span> <span word="highly">highly</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="sport">sport</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="lowly">lowly</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="languages">languages</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="girls">girls</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="hand">hand</span> <span word="tended">tended</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="score">score</span> <span word="highly">highly</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="languages">languages</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="lowly">lowly</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="sport">sport</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="obvious">obvious</span> <span word="significant">significant</span> <span word="feature">feature</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="tables">tables</span> - <span word="the">the</span> <span word="boys">boys</span> <span word="strong">strong</span> <span word="subject">subject</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="girls">girls</span> <span word="weak">weak</span> <span word="subject">subject</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="vice">vice</span> <span word="versa">versa</span>.<span word="b">b</span>.) <span word="But">But</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="comparison">comparison</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="subject">subject</span> <span word="scores">scores</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="sexes">sexes</span> <span word="reveals">reveals</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="limited">limited</span> <span word="significance">significance</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="subjects">subjects</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="boys">boys</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="girls">girls</span> <span word="got">got</span> <span word="similar">similar</span> <span word="scores">scores</span>. <span word="Boys">Boys</span> <span word="scored">scored</span> <span word="slightly">slightly</span> <span word="higher">higher</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="geography">geography</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="age">age</span> <span word="of">of</span> 15 <span word="the">the</span> <span word="scores">scores</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span>. <span word="So">So</span>, <span word="all">all</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="charts">charts</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="terms">terms</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="differences">differences</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="boys">boys</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="girls">girls</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="subject">subject</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span>, <span word="besides">besides</span> <span word="sport">sport</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="languages">languages</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="negligible">negligible</span> .<span word="c">c</span>.) <span word="The">The</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="logical">logical</span> <span word="step">step</span> <span word="then">then</span>, <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="closely">closely</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="scores">scores</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="age">age</span> <span word="groups">groups</span>. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="interesting">interesting</span> <span word="patterns">patterns</span> <span word="emerge">emerge</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="subjects">subjects</span>, <span word="except">except</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="weak">weak</span> <span word="subject">subject</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="sex">sex</span> , <span word="the">the</span> <span word="scores">scores</span>, <span word="between">between</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ages">ages</span> <span word="of">of</span> 7 <span word="and">and</span> 15, <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="overall">overall</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="sexes">sexes</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="scores">scores</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="improvement">improvement</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="constant">constant</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="particular">particular</span> <span word="age">age</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="scores">scores</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="subjects">subjects</span> <span word="fell">fell</span>. <span word="Also">Also</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="age">age</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="occurred">occurred</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="boys">boys</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="girls">girls</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="pattern">pattern</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="reveal">reveal</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="boys">boys</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="girls">girls</span> <span word="went">went</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="slump">slump</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="performance">performance</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="times">times</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="certainly">certainly</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="interesting">interesting</span> <span word="feature">feature</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="data">data</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="tables">tables</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="definitely">definitely</span> <span word="needs">needs</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="mentioned">mentioned</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="largest">largest</span> <span word="difference">difference</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="scores">scores</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="age">age</span> <span word="groups">groups</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="noticed">noticed</span>.</p>
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