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雅思写作开头段思路指导(5)

<p>  5.与题目相关的故事+说出自己的观点</p><p>  例1:</p><p>  <span word="When">When</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="child">child</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="introvert">introvert</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="showed">showed</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="least">least</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="either">either</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="activities">activities</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="talking">talking</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="friends">friends</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="adults">adults</span>. <span word="All">All</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="wanted">wanted</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="reading">reading</span>, <span word="from">from</span> <span word="fairy">fairy</span> <span word="tales">tales</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="science">science</span> <span word="fiction">fiction</span>, <span word="from">from</span> <span word="history">history</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="geography">geography</span>. <span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="complained">complained</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="character">character</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="enjoyed">enjoyed</span> <span word="reading">reading</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="today">today</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="reading">reading</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="learn">learn</span>.</p><p>  例2:</p><p>  <span word="When">When</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="younger">younger</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="hated">hated</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="oldest">oldest</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="girl">girl</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="family">family</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="remember">remember</span> <span word="telling">telling</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="mom">mom</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="wished">wished</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="youngest">youngest</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sister">sister</span> <span word="instead">instead</span>. <span word="But">But</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="grow">grow</span> <span word="older">older</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="realized">realized</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Big">Big</span> <span word="Sister">Sister</span> <span word="wasnt">wasnt</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="all">all</span>. <span word="Being">Being</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="oldest">oldest</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="girl">girl</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="advantages">advantages</span>: <span word="I">I</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="special">special</span> <span word="treatment">treatment</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="members">members</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="mature">mature</span> <span word="person">person</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="prepared">prepared</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="future">future</span>.</p><p>  例3:</p><p>  <span word="Yesterday">Yesterday</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="schoolboy">schoolboy</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="neighborhood">neighborhood</span> <span word="got">got</span> <span word="seriously">seriously</span> <span word="wounded">wounded</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="school">school</span>. <span word="He">He</span> <span word="ran">ran</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="taxi">taxi</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="cycled">cycled</span> <span word="across">across</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> 22 <span word="busy">busy</span> <span word="streets">streets</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="cover">cover</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="morning">morning</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="finally">finally</span> <span word="arrive">arrive</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="school">school</span>. <span word="Obviously">Obviously</span>, <span word="building">building</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="near">near</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="welcome">welcome</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="children">children</span>.</p><p>  例4:</p><p>  <span word="The">The</span> <span word="president">president</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="well">well</span>-<span word="known">known</span> <span word="scientist">scientist</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="field">field</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="biochemistry">biochemistry</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="neither">neither</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span> <span word="nor">nor</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="satisfied">satisfied</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="performance">performance</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="president">president</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="excellence">excellence</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="successful">successful</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="president">president</span>: <span word="fund">fund</span>-<span word="raising">raising</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="management">management</span> <span word="skills">skills</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="qualities">qualities</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="leader">leader</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="university">university</span>.</p>
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