雅思写作范文：先工作再上大学的利弊
<p> <span word="Version">Version</span> 107 <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attend">attend</span> <span word="colleges">colleges</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="universities">universities</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="graduation">graduation</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="taking">taking</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="gain">gain</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="traveling">traveling</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enlarge">enlarge</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="vision">vision</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="specific">specific</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="state">state</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="advantage">advantage</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="disadvantage">disadvantage</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="practice">practice</span>.</p><p> ----------------<span word="Discussion">Discussion</span>-----------45+14+85+16+102+55=317</p><p> ----------------<span word="Discussion">Discussion</span>-----------45+14+85+16+102+<span word="words">words</span>--------------</p><p> ----------------<span word="Discussion">Discussion</span>-----------45+14+85+16+102+------</p><p> <span word="Introduction">Introduction</span></p><p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="reported">reported</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="average">average</span> <span word="families">families</span> <span word="expenditure">expenditure</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yet">Yet</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="educate">educate</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="obsessively">obsessively</span> <span word="bothers">bothers</span> <span word="us">us</span>. <span word="A">A</span></p><p> <span word="practice">practice</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="suggested">suggested</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="traveling">traveling</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="gain">gain</span> <span word="practical">practical</span> <span word="experiences">experiences</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="taking">taking</span> <span word="tertiary">tertiary</span> <span word="education">education</span>. <span word="topic">topic</span> <span word="sentence">sentence</span> 1 <span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="advantages">advantages</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="taking">taking</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="or">or</span></p><p> <span word="travel">travel</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="high">high</span>-<span word="school">school</span> <span word="education">education</span>.</p><p> <span word="Supporting">Supporting</span> <span word="sentences">sentences</span>:</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="general">general</span>, <span word="high">high</span>-<span word="school">school</span> <span word="graduates">graduates</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="than">than</span> 20 <span word="years">years</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="professional">professional</span></p><p> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span>. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="places">places</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="society">society</span>, <span word="only">only</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="low">low</span>-<span word="paid">paid</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="laborious">laborious</span></p><p> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="offers">offers</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="available">available</span>. <span word="After">After</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="hardships">hardships</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="humiliations">humiliations</span>,</p><p> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="desire">desire</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="equipped">equipped</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="specialized">specialized</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="inevitably">inevitably</span> <span word="grow">grow</span></p>
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