雅思写作开头段思路指导（1）
<p> 1.介绍当前背景、现象、形势+说出自己的观点</p><p> 例1：</p><p> <span word="As">As</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="competition">competition</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="becomes">becomes</span> <span word="severe">severe</span>, <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="special">special</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="childrens">childrens</span> <span word="early">early</span> <span word="education">education</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span>, <span word="kindergarten">kindergarten</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="forced">forced</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="foreign">foreign</span> <span word="languages">languages</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="primary">primary</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="gasp">gasp</span> <span word="under">under</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="burden">burden</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="heavy">heavy</span> <span word="homework">homework</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="endless">endless</span> <span word="classes">classes</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>, <span word="playing">playing</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="nature">nature</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="playing">playing</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="build">build</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="strong">strong</span> <span word="body">body</span>.</p><p> 例2：</p><p> <span word="Zoos">Zoos</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="come">come</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="grim">grim</span> <span word="beginnings">beginnings</span>. <span word="Once">Once</span> <span word="full">full</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="tiny">tiny</span> <span word="cement">cement</span>-<span word="block">block</span> <span word="cages">cages</span> <span word="lined">lined</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="steel">steel</span> <span word="bars">bars</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="larger">larger</span> <span word="zoos">zoos</span> <span word="now">now</span> <span word="boast">boast</span> <span word="simulated">simulated</span> <span word="jungles">jungles</span>, <span word="veldts">veldts</span>, <span word="steppes">steppes</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="rain">rain</span> <span word="forests">forests</span>, <span word="all">all</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="attempt">attempt</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="replicate">replicate</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="animals">animals</span> <span word="natural">natural</span> <span word="habitat">habitat</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="attempt">attempt</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="admirable">admirable</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="enough">enough</span>. <span word="No">No</span> <span word="amount">amount</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="replication">replication</span>, <span word="no">no</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="convincing">convincing</span>, <span word="is">is</span> <span word="enough">enough</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="denying">denying</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="creatures">creatures</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="freedom">freedom</span>.</p><p> </p>
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