雅思写作高分范文：old people
<p> <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="about">about</span> 40 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="task">task</span>.</p><p> <span word="Should">Should</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="stay">stay</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="home">home</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="placed">placed</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="nursing">nursing</span> <span word="homes">homes</span>?</p><p> <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 250 <span word="words">words</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="ideas">ideas</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="arguments">arguments</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="examples">examples</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="relevant">relevant</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span>.</p><p> <span word="Parents">Parents</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="devoted">devoted</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="lives">lives</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="energy">energy</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="old">old</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="repay">repay</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="love">love</span>. <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="childrens">childrens</span> <span word="responsibility">responsibility</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="later">later</span> <span word="years">years</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="ensuring">ensuring</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="lead">lead</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="happy">happy</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="healthy">healthy</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="nursing">nursing</span> <span word="homes">homes</span>.</p><p> <span word="Living">Living</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="nursing">nursing</span> <span word="homes">homes</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="opportunities">opportunities</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="communicate">communicate</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="peers">peers</span>. <span word="Keeping">Keeping</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="company">company</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="dont">dont</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="lonely">lonely</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="deal">deal</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="together">together</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="morning">morning</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span>, <span word="playing">playing</span> <span word="games">games</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="exchanging">exchanging</span> <span word="memories">memories</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="stories">stories</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="past">past</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="home">home</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="left">left</span> <span word="alone">alone</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="grandchildren">grandchildren</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="away">away</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="studying">studying</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="retirement">retirement</span> <span word="homes">homes</span>, <span word="aging">aging</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="receive">receive</span> <span word="intensive">intensive</span> <span word="medical">medical</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="doctors">doctors</span>. <span word="Besides">Besides</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="receive">receive</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="proper">proper</span> <span word="diet">diet</span> <span word="prepared">prepared</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="dieticians">dieticians</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="requirements">requirements</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="health">health</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="regular">regular</span> <span word="medical">medical</span> <span word="check">check</span>-<span word="ups">ups</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="disease">disease</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="diagnosed">diagnosed</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="early">early</span> <span word="stage">stage</span>. <span word="What">What</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="beneficial">beneficial</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="disease">disease</span> <span word="strikes">strikes</span> <span word="them">them</span>, <span word="medical">medical</span> <span word="services">services</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="immediately">immediately</span> <span word="available">available</span>.</p>
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