雅思写作高分范文：children with poverty
<p> <span word="Children">Children</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="brought">brought</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="families">families</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="amount">amount</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="prepared">prepared</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="deal">deal</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="adult">adult</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="brought">brought</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="wealthy">wealthy</span> <span word="parents">parents</span>. <span word="Do">Do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span>?</p><p> <span word="Among">Among</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="factors">factors</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="influence">influence</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="childs">childs</span> <span word="development">development</span>, <span word="family">family</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="background">background</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="critical">critical</span> <span word="one">one</span>. <span word="Empirically">Empirically</span> <span word="kids">kids</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="rich">rich</span> <span word="families">families</span>, <span word="after">after</span> <span word="entering">entering</span> <span word="adulthood">adulthood</span>, <span word="deal">deal</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="differently">differently</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="well">well</span>-<span word="off">off</span> <span word="households">households</span>. <span word="Generally">Generally</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="latter">latter</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="capable">capable</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="problem">problem</span>-<span word="solving">solving</span>.</p><p> <span word="Lack">Lack</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="wealth">wealth</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="usually">usually</span> <span word="helps">helps</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="independent">independent</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="responsible">responsible</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span>. <span word="Rich">Rich</span> <span word="kids">kids</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="toys">toys</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="toy">toy</span> <span word="truck">truck</span> <span word="gets">gets</span> <span word="broken">broken</span>, <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="buy">buy</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="fancier">fancier</span>, <span word="more">more</span> <span word="expensive">expensive</span> <span word="one">one</span>. <span word="Rich">Rich</span> <span word="kids">kids</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="neighborhood">neighborhood</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="contrary">contrary</span>, <span word="children">children</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="ordinary">ordinary</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="toys">toys</span>. <span word="Their">Their</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="busy">busy</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="work">work</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="chances">chances</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="decisions">decisions</span>. <span word="Many">Many</span> <span word="kids">kids</span> <span word="babysit">babysit</span> <span word="younger">younger</span> <span word="brothers">brothers</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="sisters">sisters</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="small">small</span> <span word="part">part</span>-<span word="time">time</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="family">family</span>. <span word="Such">Such</span> <span word="differences">differences</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="upbringing">upbringing</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="tough">tough</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="adult">adult</span> <span word="life">life</span>.</p><p> <span word="Children">Children</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="affluent">affluent</span> <span word="families">families</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="competition">competition</span> <span word="early">early</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="excellent">excellent</span> <span word="grades">grades</span>, <span word="not">not</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="daddy">daddy</span> <span word="donates">donates</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="building">building</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="school">school</span>. <span word="Hard">Hard</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="constant">constant</span> <span word="trying">trying</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="fight">fight</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="winner">winner</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="rich">rich</span> <span word="kids">kids</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="over">over</span>-<span word="protected">protected</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="families">families</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="hardly">hardly</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="harsh">harsh</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="until">until</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="leave">leave</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="start">start</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="work">work</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="successful">successful</span> <span word="entrepreneurs">entrepreneurs</span>, <span word="actors">actors</span>, <span word="doctors">doctors</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="lawyers">lawyers</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="families">families</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="rich">rich</span> <span word="ones">ones</span>. <span word="Poor">Poor</span> <span word="kids">kids</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="survive">survive</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="big">big</span> <span word="wild">wild</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="rich">rich</span> <span word="friends">friends</span>.</p>
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