雅思大作文必备技巧：长短句结构
<p> 长句和短句是就句子的字数多少、形体长短而言的。长句和短句各有其优点和缺点。长句，因为使用的定语、状语较多，限制了概念的外延，增大了概念的内涵，所以比较精确、严密，但使用起来不够活泼简便。短句，由于字数少，直截了当，一般比较简洁、明快、有力，但不利于表达复杂的语义内容。长短句结构交替使用是雅思大作文的必备技巧，这既体现了节奏上的要求，也是意义上的需要。</p><p> 例如：<span word="We">We</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="imagine">imagine</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="beautiful">beautiful</span> <span word="surroundings">surroundings</span>.<span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="trees">trees</span> <span word="along">along</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="streets">streets</span>.<span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="clean">clean</span> <span word="river">river</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="city">city</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="fishes">fishes</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="river">river</span>.<span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="willow">willow</span> <span word="trees">trees</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="side">side</span>.<span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="pieces">pieces</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="grassland">grassland</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="side">side</span>.<span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="flowers">flowers</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="them">them</span>.</p><p> 文中七个句子都是简单句，句型结构单一，而且句子长短同一，都在七、八词左右，十分单调。</p><p> 修改后的段落：<span word="Just">Just</span> <span word="imagine">imagine</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="beautiful">beautiful</span> <span word="surroundings">surroundings</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="cities">cities</span> <span word="greener">greener</span>.<span word="Green">Green</span> <span word="trees">trees</span> <span word="line">line</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="streets">streets</span>.<span word="A">A</span> <span word="clean">clean</span> <span word="river">river</span> <span word="winds">winds</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="city">city</span>，<span word="in">in</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="fishes">fishes</span> <span word="abound">abound</span>.<span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="side">side</span> <span word="stand">stand</span> <span word="rows">rows</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="willow">willow</span> <span word="trees">trees</span>.<span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="side">side</span> <span word="lies">lies</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="stretch">stretch</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="grassland">grassland</span> <span word="sprinkled">sprinkled</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="yellow">yellow</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="red">red</span> <span word="flowers">flowers</span>.</p><p> 改写后的这段文字，有长句、、，也有短句和，一长一短，抑扬顿挫的节奏感就出来了。不仅句子长短交插，而且句型结构变化也很大，使文章流畅自然，生动活泼。</p>
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