雅思大作文高分范文：criminals
<p> <span word="Should">Should</span> <span word="criminals">criminals</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="sent">sent</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="jail">jail</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="let">let</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="else">else</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="punishment">punishment</span> <span word="instead">instead</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="sending">sending</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="jail">jail</span>? <span word="Why">Why</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>.</p><p> <span word="There">There</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="controversy">controversy</span> <span word="concerning">concerning</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="objectives">objectives</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="justice">justice</span> <span word="system">system</span>. <span word="Sending">Sending</span> <span word="criminals">criminals</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="prison">prison</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="justified">justified</span> <span word="punishment">punishment</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="damages">damages</span> <span word="inflicted">inflicted</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="victims">victims</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="society">society</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="currently">currently</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="goes">goes</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="option">option</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="criminals">criminals</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="appropriate">appropriate</span> <span word="amount">amount</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="community">community</span> <span word="services">services</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="substitute">substitute</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="correction">correction</span> <span word="measures">measures</span>.</p><p> <span word="Traditionally">Traditionally</span> <span word="courts">courts</span> <span word="sentence">sentence</span> <span word="law">law</span> <span word="violators">violators</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="serve">serve</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="period">period</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="prison">prison</span> <span word="or">or</span>, <span word="under">under</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="circumstances">circumstances</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="correction">correction</span> <span word="institution">institution</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="offenders">offenders</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="minors">minors</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="charges">charges</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="serious">serious</span>. <span word="Criminals">Criminals</span>, <span word="after">after</span> <span word="serving">serving</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="are">are</span> <span word="discharged">discharged</span> <span word="back">back</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="street">street</span>. <span word="Ironically">Ironically</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="end">end</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="victims">victims</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="law">law</span> <span word="itself">itself</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="forty">forty</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="served">served</span> 10 <span word="years">years</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="prison">prison</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="intentional">intentional</span> <span word="injury">injury</span>. <span word="Released">Released</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="jail">jail</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="himself">himself</span> <span word="having">having</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="making">making</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="lacked">lacked</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="skills">skills</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="work">work</span>. <span word="No">No</span> <span word="place">place</span> <span word="wanted">wanted</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="fear">fear</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="future">future</span> <span word="wrongdoings">wrongdoings</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="criminal">criminal</span> <span word="record">record</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="cases">cases</span>, <span word="ex">ex</span>-<span word="criminals">criminals</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="outcasts">outcasts</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="community">community</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="forced">forced</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="commit">commit</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="crimes">crimes</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="revenge">revenge</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>.</p><p> <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="contrary">contrary</span>, <span word="criminals">criminals</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="changed">changed</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="contributing">contributing</span> <span word="members">members</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="again">again</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="second">second</span> <span word="chance">chance</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="cases">cases</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="perform">perform</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="services">services</span> <span word="under">under</span> <span word="supervision">supervision</span> <span word="making">making</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="meager">meager</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="honest">honest</span> <span word="living">living</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="cuts">cuts</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="expenses">expenses</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="keeping">keeping</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="jails">jails</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="food">food</span>, <span word="cloth">cloth</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="numerous">numerous</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="costs">costs</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="warns">warns</span> <span word="would">would</span>-<span word="be">be</span> <span word="law">law</span> <span word="offenders">offenders</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="consequences">consequences</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="illegal">illegal</span> <span word="actions">actions</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="particularly">particularly</span> <span word="effective">effective</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="minor">minor</span> <span word="criminals">criminals</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="stand">stand</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="greater">greater</span> <span word="chance">chance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="achieving">achieving</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="corrective">corrective</span> <span word="aims">aims</span>.</p>
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