雅思流程图高分范文的写作特点
<p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="diagram">diagram</span> <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="stages">stages</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="process">process</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="making">making</span> <span word="chocolate">chocolate</span>.</p><p> 【所有的小作文第一句话都要用一般现在时。流程图必备三个词：<span word="process">process</span>：整个过程, <span word="stage">stage</span>：阶段，<span word="step">step</span>：步骤】</p><p> <span word="Chocolate">Chocolate</span> <span word="comes">comes</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cacao">cacao</span> <span word="tree">tree</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="grown">grown</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="parts">parts</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="South">South</span> <span word="America">America</span>, <span word="Africa">Africa</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Indonesia">Indonesia</span>.</p><p> 【开头不能冲上来就直接介绍<span word="cacao">cacao</span> <span word="tree">tree</span>，而是通过主题词<span word="chocolate">chocolate</span>引出，否则显得太唐突】</p><p> 【流程图特点之一：介绍过程要使用一般现在时】</p><p> 【流程图特点之二：大量使用定语从句，将有关联的两句话连接。】</p><p> 【流程图特点之三：大量使用被动语态】</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="tree">tree</span> <span word="produces">produces</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="red">red</span> <span word="pods">pods</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="contain">contain</span> <span word="white">white</span> <span word="cocoa">cocoa</span> <span word="beans">beans</span>. <span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>,</p><p> 【流程图特点之四：使用一些表示顺序的连接词】</p><p> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="pods">pods</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="ripe">ripe</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="harvested">harvested</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="beans">beans</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="removed">removed</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="fermented">fermented</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="days">days</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="wooden">wooden</span> <span word="boxes">boxes</span>.</p><p> 【三个句子的并列：句子<span word="A">A</span>，句子<span word="B">B</span> <span word="and">and</span> 句子<span word="C">C</span>。】</p><p> <span word="During">During</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fermenting">fermenting</span> <span word="process">process</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="beans">beans</span> <span word="turn">turn</span> <span word="brown">brown</span>.</p><p> 【流程图特点之五：要适当地添加个别图中没有交代但能从图片中直接读出来的的一些内容，否则可能达不到字数要求。但是一定要把握尺度，千万不要加上自己的主观观点，否则会扣分】</p>
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