雅思写作提分方法：增强写作表现力
<p> 雅思写作成绩的高低和雅思写作表现力的强弱有很大的关系，因为雅思写作题目大都是议论性质的，所以增强写作的表现力，能够在很大程度生提高雅思写作成绩。</p><p> 一、避免使用语意弱的<span word="be">be</span>动词。</p><p> 1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语，这个技巧并不是那么容易掌握，但是确实是一个能够提高雅思写组成绩的非常实用的技巧。</p><p> 例如：</p><p> <span word="Weak">Weak</span>: <span word="The">The</span> <span word="trees">trees</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="bare">bare</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="grass">grass</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="brown">brown</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="landscape">landscape</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="drab">drab</span>.</p><p> <span word="Revision">Revision</span>: <span word="The">The</span> <span word="brown">brown</span> <span word="grass">grass</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="bare">bare</span> <span word="trees">trees</span> <span word="form">form</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="drab">drab</span> <span word="landscape">landscape</span>.</p><p> <span word="Or">Or</span>: <span word="The">The</span> <span word="landscape">landscape</span>, <span word="bare">bare</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="brown">brown</span>, <span word="begged">begged</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="spring">spring</span> <span word="green">green</span>.</p><p> 2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。</p><p> 例如：</p><p> 1) <span word="Weak">Weak</span>: <span word="The">The</span> <span word="team">team</span> <span word="members">members</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="players">players</span>.</p><p> <span word="Revision">Revision</span>: <span word="The">The</span> <span word="team">team</span> <span word="members">members</span> <span word="play">play</span> <span word="well">well</span>.</p><p> 2) <span word="Weak">Weak</span>: <span word="One">One</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="plan">plan</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="elimination">elimination</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="tardiness">tardiness</span>.</p><p> <span word="Revision">Revision</span>: <span word="One">One</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="plan">plan</span> <span word="eliminates">eliminates</span> <span word="tardiness">tardiness</span>.</p><p> 3、在以<span word="here">here</span>或<span word="there">there</span>开头的句子中，把<span word="be">be</span>动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。</p><p> 例如：</p><p> 1) <span word="Weak">Weak</span>: <span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="promotion">promotion</span>.</p><p> <span word="Revision">Revision</span>: <span word="No">No</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="promotion">promotion</span> <span word="exists">exists</span>.</p><p> 2) <span word="Weak">Weak</span>: <span word="Here">Here</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="books">books</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="ordered">ordered</span>.</p>
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