雅思大作文低分原因分析：思路窄
<p> 许多考生都会感到很疑惑，为什么雅思大作文总是拿不到高分，经过分析，雅思总结出雅思大作文低分的原因之一就是考生们的思路过窄。雅思大作文低分的原因有很多，但是思路窄而使文章空洞无物是最主要的一个。大家在平常练习雅思大作文的时候都会把重点放在模板和范文的背诵上面而忽略了要准备自己的写作思路，形成自己的写作内容和思想。</p><p> 下面举两个例子给大家看一下思路窄在雅思大作文的具体体现是：</p><p> <span word="People">People</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="hundred">hundred</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="ago">ago</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="race">race</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="steadily">steadily</span> <span word="improving">improving</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="area">area</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="Nowadays">Nowadays</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="certainty">certainty</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="case">case</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="areas">areas</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="progress">progress</span> <span word="nowadays">nowadays</span>? <span word="In">In</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="areas">areas</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="progress">progress</span>?</p><p> <span word="Many">Many</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="optimistic">optimistic</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> 21<span word="st">st</span> <span word="century">century</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="positive">positive</span> <span word="changes">changes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="optimism">optimism</span>? <span word="What">What</span> <span word="changes">changes</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="century">century</span>?</p><p> 考生在应对这样的话题时，由于对客观世界所发生的真实事件的认知缺失，根本无法下手作文。78%的学员在试后承认自己是乱写的，自己也不知道在写什么。</p><p> 由于现在雅思考生呈现出低龄化现象，这部分考生人生阅历浅，对各种社会问题缺乏认识。在写作考试中，尤其是雅思大作文，他们普遍面临对问题本身没有太多了解，甚至用中文都感觉无话可说。另一方面，有些同学光有分论点，却没有能够对论点进行有效的论证。这些都导致大作文分数不高。</p>
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