雅思写作重点指导：遣词造句
<p> 首先给大家一个例子来分析一下，词句对雅思写作文章意思的理解产生量多大的影响。</p><p> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="prevalent">prevalent</span> <span word="attitude">attitude</span> <span word="amongst">amongst</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="nurses">nurses</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="reward">reward</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="recognition">recognition</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="utilizing">utilizing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="paid">paid</span> <span word="sick">sick</span> <span word="leave">leave</span> <span word="entitlement">entitlement</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="employment">employment</span> <span word="conditions">conditions</span>。</p><p> 在大多数中国考生手中，想要表达同一个意思的时候，<span word="prevalent">prevalent</span>90%都会变成<span word="popular">popular</span>,; <span word="reward">reward</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="recognition">recognition</span> 也十有八九变成了<span word="benefits">benefits</span>;<span word="a">a</span> <span word="prevalent">prevalent</span> <span word="attitude">attitude</span> <span word="amongstwas">amongstwas</span> <span word="that">that</span>，几乎全部变成了<span word="many">many</span> <span word="nurses">nurses</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span>。</p><p> 所以这也就是大家雅思写作分数越来越低的根本原因。大家的遣词造句的能力实在不高，英语词汇太过千篇一律。</p><p> 另外一个例子更有代表性，当你想表达想的时候，你会怎么写，<span word="think">think</span>几乎会立即出现在你的脑中。但是像<span word="agree">agree</span>，<span word="recommend">recommend</span>，<span word="claim">claim</span>等等被细化了的单词就被大家遗忘在角落里了，所以大家的雅思写作重点还是要放在遣词造句上。</p><p> 另外一个例子：</p><p> <span word="Similar">Similar</span> <span word="attitudes">attitudes</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="noted">noted</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="James">James</span>, <span word="who">who</span> <span word="noted">noted</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="sick">sick</span> <span word="leave">leave</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="seen">seen</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="right">right</span>, <span word="like">like</span> <span word="annual">annual</span> <span word="holiday">holiday</span> <span word="leave">leave</span>。</p><p> 根据这个例子，有考生写为：</p><p> <span word="James">James</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="thought">thought</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="sick">sick</span> <span word="leave">leave</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="rights">rights</span>, <span word="like">like</span> <span word="annual">annual</span> <span word="holiday">holiday</span> <span word="leave">leave</span>。</p><p> </p>
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