肖宇：突破雅思写作5.5分魔咒
<p> 突破雅思写作5.5分魔咒雅思写作技巧分享</p><p> 文/ 沈阳 肖宇</p><p> 在教学三年多，一直教授雅思托福赛达等各种出国考试的写作，也多次亲自参加各种考试来积累考试经验，针对这三种写作，广大同学们公认雅思写作最难得分或者提分。我见过很多英语很棒的同学，考了<span word="N">N</span>次雅思，听力和阅读达到8分，但写作一直都悲催的5.5或者甚至5分，由于本科和研究生院都要求雅思成绩单项不低于6，很多人都因写作分数不够而不得不放弃出国的梦想。笔者几年来不断参加考试实战，总结了一些教学和考试经验，跟大家分享一些雅思写作备考方法，希望帮助烤鸭们走出5.5分魔咒，获得高分。</p><p> 1. 关于模板：</p><p> 很多同学问我，雅思写作能否用模板得高分。学员们的成绩说明，模板可保证5或5.5分甚至偶尔6分，但绝对会制约你得6.5分以上的高分。什么是模板?大家对下面这种中国人惯用的开头段方式不会陌生吧: <span word="With">With</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="technology">technology</span>, <span word="plays">plays</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="role">role</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="arouses">arouses</span> <span word="heated">heated</span> <span word="debate">debate</span>. <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="think">think</span>, <span word="others">others</span> <span word="think">think</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span>.这就是最恶俗的制约我们得6分以上分数的开头段模板。我们对比一下考官在剑8里写的满分开头段：</p><p> 题目:1：</p><p> <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="teach">teach</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="members">members</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="society">society</span>. <span word="Others">Others</span>, <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="place">place</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="this">this</span>. <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="views">views</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>.</p>
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